A COMMON LOVE STORY – LAST PART

Well aadab, Namaste,helloooo everyone……..

Lets start our special chapter today,

Guys/friends/readers J here is an advanced and shortened update, that I planned to post for a week……….

ACLS “VALENTINES WEEK SPECIAL”

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“Hum hai raahi pyaar ke fir milenge chalte chalte”

I was in solitude and destitute, I had been ignored,

I tried my best to get into spotlight again, but all in vain…..

They all were busy in their own sweet world,

So this uncherishedstar decided , to go for oblivion,

In distress and an emotionally weak state, I signed, my scholarship documents,

And all set to go to the new,

It’s not that I,didn’t try to go to the root of everything, I –I tried my best,

But all I got in my hand was dissapiontment,and rejection, and being ignored,

Soon the call letter arrived, from my new place, and all set for a new journey,

I asked my mother not to tell siso the full thing as she would grow sad,

Actually that was something inter alia, I just wanted to be alone , alone not disturbed by anyone…… and couldn’t see <3 him <3 with someone else…………. I left for the journey when my siso was not there, as I found it hard to escape her questions at home, and when she would be there at the airport with me couldn’t escape her, because I lied her about the place…… I went there and tried to settle , but whenever I saw a couple ,it just……….. And as I closed my eyes , all the memories flashed infront of me, Our cute moments and then that day……………..when……….. My cousin got a prop, and I got a rejection…………..my sister found her soulmate, and I lost mine…………… Well time , walked slow………………. I carried on with my broken heart,and on………… But………… But everything has it’s limit….. So does sorrow…………….. “Uske ghar der hai andher nahi” And……and………..and………. Something just happened which healed my broken heart…………….. A call………… a call that I did home………. Strangely that week my sisters showed keen interest on me ,and knowing my whereabouts, They investigated or interrogated the , college students about me WHAT!!! REALLY?? SERIOUSLY……… They noticed me ……………………… Took the pain to search for me, visit me……………… That too a surprise visit which wasn’t under the knowledge of the elders otherwise , mum knew it all……….. She wouldn’t have allowed them and , laid stress on waiting for my visit……. As it was costly to purchase soo many plane tickets, and the visa yeah visa was another issue………… They found it fishy, and checked mammas phone, and there it goes………. They found a lead about me , and investigated the number, and found out that it was a foreign number, They called back, and I took the call, and it all got cleared for them, their strange talk that day gave me a sign of suspicion but I ignored, The next was a news my sissies going on a longgg trip………… But I found them there investigating about me they were five in number………. My sissies and those three brothers, What was ♥he♥…………….. Their presence irked me , but I thought may, be they be on a family visit….. I ran towards them, as I wanted to meet mama and papa , I had been without them for the longest duration one big month and that too far…….. Bad luck they went before I could………… Well I enquired the one they enquired, and got to know that they were…….. They were here on their own, alone…… in foreign without parents and were finding me………. Buy why like this? Why no……… why secretly…… and why was ♥he♥……… The questions , ran through my mind as I informed our worried parents , Soon they found me and my siso hugged me tight , while the BG freaks smiled looking at us…………… Actually I found them, they just hid seeing me as if I were a ghost,

♥♥He♥ ♥ was there too, and avoided an eye contact,

Then was a dinner invitation for me by them, at first I declined but had to accept as they, really were convincing this time,

The dinner table was set in the rooms lobby, and they the hell booked an VVIP and costly suit,

No , not suit suits….

From where in heavens they got the money………

Ohh it may be , they robbed or tricked , as I know them very well, the best of actors , they would surely win Oscar,grammy , and Nobel prize if nominated…..

We had the dinner and I left for my place , ♥he♥ offered to drop me till the car,

I solemnly accepted his♥ offer, and we left ……..

While on our way ♥♥he♥♥ tried his best to say something but failed,

♥♥He♥♥continuously gazed at me till we reached, the door and the durbaan opened the hotel door for us,

The next he gave a sign of a gentleman , and opened the car door for me and closed it after I sat in,

Well on our way I could hear the leftover’s voices who in their opinion were, speaking in a low tone only to be heard by them,

♥♥he♥♥ waved good bye , and his eyes were filled with……….

Emotions………

As my vehicle started moving they joined ♥♥him♥♥ and the junior kept his hand on ♥♥his♥♥ shoulder and ♥♥he♥♥ looked down……

After that I lost their view as the car moved on……

Next day to my surprise I found them all at my, colleges gate. How did thwy??

Anyways now they were there…………….

They requested me for a walk in a nearby place and I agreed,while walking we all had a few discussions and then, they stopped for some street food ,

While we had food my sissies eagle eyes spotted some roses and she demanded them, and the hansom guys fulfilled their that wish too,

They cut talks of the vendor trying to say something….

I also saw many girls with roses there , I thought to myself may be this place roses are too famous and,

As per their plan they commented on me without the roses and asked ♥♥him♥♥ to present me some ………..

I asked him not to but ♥he♥ insisted…….. and there I was with a colored bunch of roses white ,yellow and RED………..

And strangely ♥he♥ blushed while presenting them to me, and I thought why ?? why was ♥he♥ doing this??

What about that cute old friend??

Ah!! To Hell go she I really liked the present J

Now a guy came running and calling my name, they all looked shocked seeing him, and as the new guy joined us , he gave a gentle pat on my head stating that , I went without informing and he was waiting for me , as we were supposed to go back together ,

Well well well

The faces of the panch daanavs or the visitors group were worth seeing,

I left with the new guy , and the group was too shocked that they didn’t reacted even a bit,

And we left without any introduction, while leaving I saw him, clinching his fist, and ll looked sad

The next we reached our place and the new guy informed it was ,

“ THE ROSE DAY” FEB-7

OMG!!! WHAT??

I really forgot it and this day ♥♥he♥♥ presented me with ……….

Awwwww………….

I m really dumb dumb dumb dumb,

He also told me he saw my lovelyyy♥♥♥ clinching his fist on seeing him and I blushed more………..

He complimented on my tomato red face……… and teased me……………

I said “bhaiyaa please ab itna bhi mat chedo, aise naa dekho naazar lag jaayegi”

( hey bro pls. don’t badeye my love and stop teasing me)

He laughed out aloud and I looked at him angrily, and the teasing session went on till we slept, before which we made a plan to………….

FEB-8 PROPOSE DAY

I wondered that how would ♥♥he♥♥ propose me now that ♥♥he♥♥ is too shy even to talk ,

I thought it wasn’t his piece of cake and a bet fixed with my bro,

Hmmmm I wished I was wrong and also that he would be my……..

It felt that god granted my wish in an instant and I heard,

TATHASTU…………..

The prop was somewhat like this , we went to a fair where the theme was partners and friends, we walked separate,

Only couples were allowed to enter my sissies chose their , and the left ones were of course ♥♥he♥♥ and me………

And I refused as per plan made last night,

But all made innocent puppy faces and blackmailed me ,

I acted as if they were able to convince me and I was going for their sake,

Inside I wanted the same J

Then we were stamped and we went in, then there was some competition where they registered our name too for under freshers

And then the freshers were called on the stage , and before going siso, elbowed me and said , “naak mat katwaana” and uski izzat rakhna……

I found her words fishy . but all ready for everything,

We played a few series of games lost and won, as the final result was to be decided on the bases of overall performance,

Many couples fought and were disqualified,we remained …… but avoiding eye contacts which was noticed by the judges,

We didn’t win the best couple award but were awarded shyest couple , and we were asked to propose infront of everyone,

He hesitated a bit and I looked on, finally a prop and a yes and two tomato red faces on the stage between the applause,

We left the stage and they teased us , and I then bro reentered the scene and they declared the proposal acceptance, and he stated about spoke the cute girl who, and called her ♥♥his♥♥ GF

If not part of plan Bro u really would have landed in hospital……

Well that girl yes she , she was revealed to be the one,

Who……… who….. 😛 was really flirting with him and tried her chance, but failed as ♥♥he♥♥ ……………..

♥♥He♥♥ LOVED ME…………

I really almost cried and my sissies wiped my tears and we left with an emotional revelation,

I jumped in joy but acted being cross with them for all that ……….

And stated I did it to not to insult ♥♥him♥♥ and they just…………..

Well tadpho tadpho, tadpho beta badla abhi baaki hai kyunki tadphan ke bina pyaar maaza kahan,

And bro took me and gave them an angry look…….. he he no intro still… they still don’t know he is my bro,

Who once used to be fatty, and now have changed to the extent that our mother even didn’t recognize him at first and was gonna scold me for being with ………….

He narrated the whole matter and asked them to wait till VD to land a hit on the fakers group…

They first, declined but after the , yes of ♥♥his♥♥ parents and their acceptance, towards/for me changed their mind and my mum kissed me on my forehead……….

Well that night I slept peacefully after long and thought to myself that why all the girls of this family ended up with guys of that family………..

Here I had a peaceful sleep there they were cooking plans 😛 ,

FEB-9 CHOCOLATE DAY

That day Mr.Rep….. and junior guy kept bro busy while sissies came with us and then,

Don’t actually remember as a confused series of events ended up me with a huge basket of chocolate presented by ♥♥him♥♥

FEB-10- TEDDY DAY

As per their plan he earned a teddy for me in a fair ………..

I heard them murmuring that they were short of money ………

Well I informed the bank authorities, I mean our parents and they filled the money in account ,

Anyone would suspect something wrong but not those group of jerks, who were busy plotting and were in dearth/need of money,

The next was ……….

FEB 11-PROMISE DAY

We wondered what promise would he give or take……….

But ………….

But………… that day

I met with an accident , as had serious head injuries……..

I just remembered seeing a faint , vague image rushing towards me for the rescue……..

Dunno who was it as all went black……….

I gained consciousness after three days on FEB-14 VALENTINES DAY……

As I opened eyes , I saw my family infront of me, and someone holding my hand , it was ♥♥him♥♥

All smiled looking at me while I noticed something strange I saw a black eye , MR. Rep. and all the guys had a black eye, and bro a bandaged hand most probably someone had a punch from my bro,

I then ran my eyes through the room and smiled back at them………..

Then something strange happened a signal from the elders and he hugged me and then kissed me on my forehead…………….

And fell on his knees and said, “will you be MY VALENTINE”

All slapped their heads and said in a snchronised voice “VALENTINE??” and the nurse gave a stare and ♥♥he♥♥ scratched his head cutely and puled his ears,

And reached his pocket and a ‘RING’

And final proposal “WILL U MARRY ME” and I shook my head in a yr=es all clapped and congratulated us ,

And elders blessed us J

We married soon, with miss meddler and shelfishies as burning guests,

They burned in jealousy, and we started our newlife

Cute bickering, ruthna manana was a part…………..

But we always remained as a single soul……….

And shared many cute moments J …….

Well I didn’t know how to express,

And a filmy dialogue that usually recives shocked and rebellious reaction in Indian cinema,

‘MAIN TUMHARE BACCHE KIM AA BANANE WALI HOON’

Well shock was a must but I recived hugs and kisses and , blessings……

AND WE FORMED A SMALL HAPPY FAMILY AND THUS, LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER………………

About other couples they too met an happy ending

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

It all started with that one accidental collision…………

♥♥♥♥♥♥THE END♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

https://youtu.be/pAkJPRLWVqU

HEYY FRIENDS HOPE YOU LIKED THE UPDATE AND I CONFUSED U LESS AND PLSS SILENT READERS DO COMMENT ON THIS LAST UPDATE WAITING FOR YOUR FEEEDBACK , AND HOPE U ENJOYED THIS SWEET JOURNEY FRNDS 🙂
THANK YOU-

Credit to: Richa

28 comments

  1. Ruby

    clap..clap…clap…superb richu…MAIN TUMHARE BACHE KI MAA BANNEWALI HOON 😛 😛 liked it…waise richu bataya nahi kitne bache ? 😉

  2. Hahaha ruby dr nyc to c ur cmnt lol ♥ u nd well bcchey bchey pta nahi kitne bchey 😛 only knw bachey h nd dr hum toh aapke bchon ki maasi / khaala bnege hpe khaala is masi nt bua 😛 (¬‿¬) lol
    hope u saw d link in d stry nd likd the pics ☺ nd .i hope to c the old cmntrz cmnts also 😎
    lol gm sd tc c ya

  3. manha

    wah wah. Kya valentine gift hain. I can imagine our heroes life with our drama queen. He is so sweet n cute. N our heroine uff kitne drame karti hain. But i’m very happy for the ever so sweet n fantastic ending with valentine week. I enjoyed this story a lot. All r happy. Yep all the girls frm this house married to boys of that house. lol. kismat connection. par tumne bataya nahin sab ko balck eye kaise huwa aur bro ka hand me plaster kaise aaya.

    Haan richuuu bacche kitne the??!!!
    They robbed or tricked for money. lol. N what they can get oscar, granny if nominated. Toooo funny. Thank u very much for this story. loveeeee u meri jaaaan.

  4. Manhaa daarlinggg aankhon hi aankhon pe jab punch pad jata h zor se toh woh laal aur kaali ho jati h aur marne wala zor se mare ya mis kar de nd diwr hit kare toh plaster aa jata h nd agar bhai garam dimaag ho toh ye sab toh pakka hona hi h 😎 yup kismat cnctn jitne yahan ladkiyan wahan ladke aur drama queen ahh baaz nahi ayegi well kaisa paisa jab paas h honey y y care 4 mny nd India ki abadi phle hi bhut h mere stry k protagnst h plannig hogi
    thanx for following nd ♥ u 2 😎
    lol gm tc and 12 k bad subh hoti h so gm

  5. dia

    Aweeesommeee

    lovelyyyy

    great….m srsly having no words di…….i jst lvd it….

    U r awsm

    aap srsly ek writer bn skte ho

    di….i hav another idea to trouble u….u can write acls again with hero’s pov…..

    Well i kno u won’t

    but u may

    ohh i dnt kno

    i jst lv acls

    nd u too

    <3 u richu di

    DEVU DI
    if u r reading this….atb fr exams….jang jeet kar ana mere sipahi…..

    Nishu…luv uu

  6. Liya

    Y did u end the stry al f a sudden. . . It was going gud 🙂 😀 bt thank u for dis difrnt n cute stry 🙂

  7. Heyyy ya liya nd dia nice to c ur cmnts nyc to c u bak liya nd thank u for following the fic ♥ u nd dr i finishd bcoz many left the page nd i wud be busy nw for 3 mnths as functions prac. Nd xams so its hard to update dr nd it wud hav been like 1 update a week lol and valentines day was gud opu to end lol if i hurt u dr ☀
    dia dr ur req i wil process but the reasn i ended is time …… And if u cn bear late updates i wil nd responce matters lol thanx a lot lovly 4 following lov u tc
    ♥ ☀☺

  8. Jwala

    awwww …………….just luvd ,,,,i MEAN TOATLLY ……..LU LU LUV U A LOOOT……………AND I AM SAD IT ENDED BUT THIS WAS THE BEST EPI ……OHH …I AM GONNA MISS UR FF…. 🙁 ………………….AND THEY REALLY R THE BEST SHYEST CUTEST COUPLE …..SUCH A CUTE LUV STORY …THSI IS NOT A COMMON LUV STORY …..BECAUSE IT’S NOT COMMON………IT’S A SPECIAL AND LIMITED VERSION ……………….WILL NOT BE FOUND EVERYWHERE…………..LUV THE HERO AND HEROINE OF THIS STORY ,,,,,,,,AND HEROINES COUSINS TOO….AND THEIR PRANKS …OHH I WILL MISS THIS FF VERY BADLY ,,,,,,FOR SURE……… ……………………………

  9. NISHA

    HEY RICHU DEAR

    VERY LOVELY UPDATE DEAR

    IT SEEMS LIKE i READ UR HEART DEAR

    WHICH IS VERY PURE AND CUTE FEELINGS

    dEAR ONE REQUEST TO YOU.

    sEE U SAID THIS IS YOUR REAL LIFE BASED STORY AND REAL LIFE NEVER STOPS.

    WHO TOLD U TO WRITE A RAMAYAN OR MAHABHAARAT KIND OF STORY WE JUST TOLD U TO SHARE UR HEART

    tHE KHOOBI OF SHARING YOUR HEART IN UNIQUE WAY

    wRITE 4 LINES AND U GOT UR FRIENDS MAY BE THE SITUATION WILL STOP THEM SOMETIMES BUT SOONER OR LATER YOU GET TO SEE ALL THE NAMES U REMEMBER.

    U KNOW GIVE THE TIME TO UR STUDIES

    AND WHEN U SEE DIN ME TAARE

    dUNIYA BAN JAAYEGI GOL YES IT HAPPENS WHEN WE STUDY CONTINOUSLY FOR LONG TIME THEN CAME TO TU WRITE UR HEART IN ACLS

    A COMMON LOVE STORY OF rICHA WHICH IS VERY UNIQUE

    DON’T CLOSE THE DOORS DEAR TAKE TIME FOR STUDIES DON’T WRITE MUCH WRITE A LITTLE AND THEN TUMHARE HEART KE LIYE HEALTHY HOGA ITNA SHARING KARNA DIL HALKA HO JAAYEGAA

    YES DEAR LOVE U BY HEART

    ALWAYS NOT FOR MY STORY NOR FOR UR STORY, BUT i LOVED IT BECAUSE i FIND OUT SOMEWHERE THAT IT IS UR STORY AND i LOVED IT AND MOREOVER

    i LOVE U DEAR MORE THAN ANY STORY ,

    jAISEE HO VAISEE REHNA BECAUSE i LOVE U FOR WHAT U ARE .

    lOVE U DEAR

    KEEP SMILING

    oNCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND .

    HELOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO JWALU , SWEETO MASAKALI DEVGA DEAR, HELOOOOOOOOO LIYA LONG TIME DEAR LOVE U, HELOO SWEETHEART DIA, HELLOO RUBY

    LOVE U ALL

    AND i AM SURE YOU ALL ALSO THINK THAT RICHU WILL HAVE TO THING TWICE BEFORE GIVING A FULL STOP TO A COMMON LOVE STORY.

    WHAT SAY

    LOVE U ALL

    KEEP SMILING
    ONCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND

  10. richa (titli)

    NISHAA NIASHA IT GOES 4 U 2 II M NOT ASKING MAHABHARAT JUSTT A SMALL UPDATE 1CE A WEEK PLSZZZZZZZ rozzzz ab meri stryy toh haii nahii toh utne tym type and 1 week m atleast 100 wrds ho jayengeeeeee thyen post LOL nd ur md manha nd diaa cmmmnts make me happy happy as lagta h pdha h tumne bcozz u give summaly nd aadhe cmmnt sar k oopar se gya
    din m taare kyun?? uske baad samajh naai aaya LOL 😛
    tc and post soon

    here 4 u

    https://www.wattpad.com/217267537-a-common-love-story-heroes-pov-acls-s2-part-1-dil

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    Hope u liked heroes introoo type LOL should I post it orr not??
    If yes pls copy paste for me and send it dr nish will u na??bhejne k baad comment zalool kalna , credit m chahe apna naam daalna 😛 aul acchi si cute si dp plss . hmmm….. nini aa rhi h kyunki m 3 ghante se lappy k saamne hu aur screen ko ghoori jaa rhi hu 😛 LOL nish , dia behn kaisi rahi umeed h I didn’t disappoint ur req. and plss coooprate ok updates will b lazy n late and may cm after a month plllss coooprate , aur haann copy paste sirf THANK U *~*~tak karna ye bhaashan mat karna KILL u for that , well agar accha h tohi post karna as m nt sure kkkkk , LOL TC CU

  11. Nope npe yet but for dia’s request i hav postd heroes pov chap 1 n wattpad the abov link for that bt nt wrking so u cn go to wattpad nd search a common love story by richashrma m nt sure wethr itz gud or nt if gud do copy paste nd send to tu fr me ᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ nd well ystrday i postd a piece of writing u cn read that nd a tip i write smtym short story ff nd my stry name start from a an the always nd are in capitals start mainly wth big heloo nd bhashan so easy to find 😉 lol tc nd i think i hav eht left nd m dng maza may b i post eht tomo bt m busy so may b lol tc

  12. nisha

    hey richu dear I try to find your story in wattpad but unable to find it there are so many story even named a common love story also.

    I find a long list but couldn’t find ur name with a common love story dear

    luv u always by heart

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend

  13. Jwala

    I was there in wattpad but deleted my account …….but soon i will activate it ……because reading books is like breathing air ….can’t live without it ?

  14. richa (titli)

    BEHNOOO CHK IT NW LINKK WERKINGGGG 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 nyways i hav sent it to TU sooo dnt wrry it wud b pppppublishd

  15. Devga

    Richa so sooryyyy …. I dint knw abt this last chap … Thts y I gave a confused and ?¿ kind of comment to the acls hero pov …. Sorry ….
    Mujhe aalsi kaha ?? How dare u … How dare u …. Hahaha u can cal me anything my creature …. Love u and yea all r correct its gud u started acls hero pov ….
    Sorry guys nisha dia and richu …. I dint knw abt this chap …. Forgive me

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