7 chumzzzzzzz forever (epi-47)

7 chumzzzzzzz forever (epi-46)

Hiiii sweetuuu’s how are you all… I’m here with my next chappy…

Let’s for it
Continues…..

Twinkle with teared eyes: kunj… Vo Mai… I’m sorry…I’m nothing in front of ur love….
Kunj : enough twinkle… I don’t want to hear anything… Thank you for making me realize … How much u loved me…
Twinkle holds his hand: please…
Kunj look at her… Her eyes was tearing…
Kunj( not able to see her tears) :pls twinkle… Stop crying…
Twinkle wipes her tears: kunj… I…
Kunj : enough… I don’t want to hear anything…

Kunj tries to open the door… But door was locked…
Twinkle : see… Even God doesn’t want u to leave this room..
Kunj angrily looks at her : not god… Our friends… ( kunj hits door hardly by his hand.. His hand gets hurted)
Kunj : haa…
Twinkle: what happened kunj.. ( she holds his hand)
Kunj angrily takes his hand back :I know what to do… For last 3 years I was alone…
Twinkle felt bad…
Kunj shouts: guys open the door… Please guys… Otherwise I’ll break it…
Boys opens the door..
Boys: when happened kunj…

Kunj: guys… This pain will never go so easily…
Kunj angrily leaves from there…
Chumzzzzzzz hugs twinkle…
Chumzzzzzzz : twinkiii… Are Ur fine
Twinkle simles : haa chumzzzzzzz… I’m fine… No I’m happy… That still my kunj loves me… More than before.. He can’t bare my tears…
Boys : but kunj…
Twinkle: don’t worry guys… I promise… I’ll bring our old kunj back….
Boys : ya ur right… Love can beat Anything…
Chumzzzz: All the best…

Twinkle hugs chumzzzzzzz: I’m very happy…
Uvi : guys… It’s already late..
Boys in teasing tone : ohhh… Uvi is very eager haa… Mahi be careful…
Mahi blushes…
Chumzzzz: ohhh Mahi… Blushing…
Uvi : enough guys…I’m very tried…come Mahi…
Chumzzzz: ohh wait… We want to talk to her…
Uvi : but…

Boys : poor Uvi…
Boys laughs and gives hifi each other..
Uvi : OK laugh…no one there to understand me…
Mahi in low voice: Uvi.. I’ll come just now…
Chumzzzzzzz and boys : ohh… Ohh.. Now we are out..
Mahi : no guys… Nothing like that…
Chumzzzzzzz: I know our Mahi.. OK u go and take rest… Good night…
Boys in teasing tone : happy frist night..
Mahi blushes…
They both leaves from there…
In uvi’s room…
Whole room was decorated… With rose petals….
Mahi: woooow uvi… It’s so beautiful…
Uvi hugs her from back: not more than u….
Mahi simles: now my uvi… Only mine…I love you…
Uvi : I love you too…
Mahi breaks hug and moves towards mirror… She starts to remove her bangles….
Uvi moves towards her and holds her hand…
Mahi: uvi what are you doing…
Uvi pins her to wall.. And holds her waist.. Pulls close to him..
Mahi: uvi…
Uvi : shhhh…
Mahi close her eyes… He moves even more close to her… His lip was about to touch her…. they both was very close to each other… Suddenly Alarm clock rings… They comes to scene…
Mahi: uvi.. What’s that sound…

Uvi: wait let me check…
Uvi started to search… At last uvi gets that Alarm clock under the pillow..
Mahi: ohh… This…
Uvi off that…
Uvi simles and pulls her close to him… They both falls on bed… He slowly moves his on her back… Mahi close her eyes… Uvi moves close to her… He was about to kiss on her neck…
Again Alarm clock rings…
Uvi in anger: what the…
He again starts to search… He gets it inside the drawer…. He stops that Alarm… He was about to moves close towards Mahi… Again Alarm clocks rings..

Uvi: ohhh…im not going to leave that idiots…
Mahi starts to laugh…
The day ends with uvi’s confused face… Next day…
( boys and chumzzzzzzz toke one week leave… And came to Kolkata… To enjoy with friends.. They planned to stay in guests house… For one week)
In Raglak room…
Laksh was sleeping very calmly.. By hugging his pillow…
Ragini comes from washroom… She was wearing simple Anarkali…
Ragini : laksh ur still sleeping… Go and freshup…
She sitting near him..
Ragini : laksh… Wake up…..
Laksh: Ragini wait.. Nah…
Ragini:No wait…
Laksh pulls her… She falls on him…
Ragini: laksh… Leave me…
Laksh hugs her tightly…
Ragini: laksh…
Laksh: woow… Ragini it’s very special feeling when ur near me…..
Ragini : ohh… Really.. my jaan please leave… And stop ur drama…
Ragini pulls him and frees herself….

Ragini: I’m going… Do whatever u want…
She leaves from there…
Laksh: Ragini… Wait nah…ohh shittt.. (to himself) laksh wake up its good for you..

In Aradika Room…
Arjun was bzy in his on laptop..
Radika: Arjun here is ur coffee…
Arjun: who told you to bring coffee now…
Radika : bcoz it’s ur time for coffee.. No need to say…
Arjan : from Today onwards I no need coffee..
Radika: but why…

Arjun: u should take rest…
Radika : Arjun.. I’m fine… Believe me..
Arjun keeps a laptop a side and moves towards Radika…cups her face: Ya I know ur fine… But it’s my responsibility to take care of u and my baby…
Radika hugs him: but Arjan… I don’t want to take rest…
Arjun : Radika for our baby u have to…
Radika makes puppy face: Arjun… Please… Arjun : Radika… Don’t make me angry… OK if you need I’ll give you one gift…
Radika: gift…
Arjun: haa…
Radika: OK then give me…

Arjan moves close to her…
Radika : Arjun… What are doing…
Arjun holds her waist… He was about to kiss her lips..
Radika pushes him: no way….drink ur coffee.. I’m going…
Arjun: Radika.. Wait nah…
Suddenly Radika feels illness…
Arjun: what happened Radika…

Radika: don’t know…
Arjun: I told you…
He takes her in his arms…
Radika: Arjun.. What are you doing…
Arjun: chuppp… Ek dam chuppp…
He makes her to lay on bed…
Radika: Arjun…
Arjun hugs her : Radika… Ur fine right… I love you Radika…
Radika hugs him back : I love too… And don’t worry I’m fine…

In kunj’s Room…
Twinkle enters to the room with cup coffee… She sees kunj sleeping where calmly… With a sweet simle in his face… She simles by seeing him… She sees sun ray was falls on him… She moves near window…
Twinkle by looking at sun: please sun… My kunj is sleeping don’t disturb him… By saying that She close the curtain…
She moves towards kunj….she keeps cup of coffee aside.. And sites beside kunj… She looks at him… She slowly moves and lays on his chest… Her eyes was tearing…

Twinkle: kunj… I’m sorry….im really very sorry for everything… I love you soo much Kunj… I Can’t live without u..
( Tu aata hai seene mein
Jab jab saansein bharti hoon
Tere dil ki galiyon se
Main har roz guzarti hoon
Hawaa ke jaise chalta hai tu
Main ret jaisi udti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon
Ho ho…. Plays)
Her tears drops to his chest…
Kunj wakes up.. Bcoz of her tear drops…

Kunj : twinkle…
(Twinkle gets up…)
Twinkle: Mai vo… ( she wipes her tears)
Kunj: what are you doing in my room…
Twinkle : why I can’t come to ur room…
Kunj: noo… U can’t…
Twinkle: ohh really… I came here to give you one thing…
Kunj: give it and go fast…
Twinkle: OK… ( she plates kiss on his cheek.)
Kunj was shocked…
Twinkle leaves from there…
Kunj : twinkle tum… ( he touches his cheek and he simles)

In manan..
Nandini was standing in front of mirror…
Nandini: Manik… How I’m looking…
Manik was bzy in his game…
Manik without looking at her : nice…
Nandini: only nice…
Manik: haa…
Nandini makes puppy: OK wait… Now..
Manik: mmm…
Nandini: what mmmm… Say now how I’m looking…
Manik: good…
Nandini in anger takes his phone: what good haa… I’m asking you something ur playing game…
Manik: Nandini… Don’t disturb me… Give my phone…

Nandini: ur playing Olympics…. U don’t want to care me…
Manik: Nandini… Please Nandini give my phone…..its last round…
Nandini: do whatever u want im going… ( she throws phone a side)
She leaves from their…
Manik : Nandini… Listen to me…
Nandini: no…
Manik to himself : ohh God…
Manik goes behind her…
Manik: Nandini… I’m sorry…
Nandini : I don’t care…
Manik holds her hand: please… Baby…

Nandini in anger: leave my hand…
Manik drags her to one corner: I’m sorry… Ur looking very beautiful…
Nandini: thank you.. Leave me…
Manik holds her waist : ohh my sweetheart is angry on me…
Nandini: haa… I’m…
Manik: sorry… I love you so much…

Nandini simles: Love you too…
Manik: then give my sweet…
Nandini: ohh.. If you eat sweet like this u will have diabetes…
Manik: it’s OK… Please…
Nandini moves close to him… She touches his lips by her….
Nandini breaks lip lock: idiot…
She moves…
Manik simles…

In Nisam Room…
Sam: Neil… Here is ur shirt… Get ready fast…
Neil: OK…
Sam: what OK… Get ready fast…
Neil : OK OK baba…
Neil stops Sam by holding her pallu..( Sam was wearing plain saree… She was looking very hot)
Sam : Neil… What are you doing…
Neil pulls her close to him…
Sam blushes: Neil…
Neil pulls her even more close to him… (Neil was shirtless) her back touches on his chest…
Sam: Neil…please…
Neil hugs her from back…. He closes his eyes…
Sam simles: Neil… What happened to u…
Neil: Sam… I don’t want break this hug…

Sam: ur fine right…
Neil: mmmhhhh…
Sam: if you have any stress please say…
Neil: Nothing my jaan…
Sam: sure..
Neil: haaa…
Sam: Love you so much…
Neil : love you too…
Sam : now leave…
Neil leaves…
Sam : come fast…

Neil: OK..

In swasan Room…
Sanskar : swara where is my back coffee…
Swara was drying her hair: what!! back coffee… Sanskar no shame… Ur asking coffee to me… I’m ur one only wife…. Chi I didn’t expect this from u…
Sanskar : I just asked my coffee…
Swara : no… I want to hear anything….
Sanskar : ohhh God… Please stop ur drama… I don’t want anything….
Swara: Sanskar…
Sanskar: mmmhhhh…
Swara: I was thinking to join in ur office…
Sanskar: why….
Swara: what u mean by why…
Sanskar: I mean… No need.. I can’t bear u in house itself … Only my office is I gets release… If you come there…
Swara In anger : ohhh really.. Ur bearing me…
Sanskar: haa… Only I can bear u…

Swara: Sanskar… U not loves me… Right…
Sanskar: haa… Ur very late to realize that…
Swara hugs him from back… Her eyes was tearing…
Sanskar : haii… My Pattaka is crying… Swara tum bhi nah …
Sanskar turns towards her and cups his face: if I’m living it’s only for u… Swara…
Swara : I can’t stay sec without…
Sanskar hugs her: Love you… I can’t explain how much…
Swara : I love you too…
Sanskar : OK stop crying…
Swara: I’ll bring back coffee for u…
She leaves from there…
Sanskar simles: paglli…

In hall…
Breakfast was ready… Boys comes to hall…
In dinning table is set…
Manik : uvi… How was your last night…
Uvi kept silent…
Twinkle: we hope it was good…
Uvi :it was awesome… Kunj :I think Alarm didn’t disturb u guys…
Ragini : Uvi… I told him… No need of alarm…
Neil: haa uvi… It was girls idea…
Uvi : u guys spoiled last night…
Boys : Mahi… We saved u…
Chumzzzzzzz and boys gives hifi each other… And laughs…

To be continued…

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[GUYS PLS READ IT.. this is my 47th episode…. For next episode my storyline will end… Means my ff will end… If you guys no need to end my ff… I’ll continue second part… With their children’s love story… Not only their love story… There is many thinks to happen…
So please please πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»…

I request you all to… Say ur opinion and suggestions… It’s very important for me and my ff… If you guys need to continue then I’ll continue… If not then I’ll end…All depends on u… So please guys drop ur expensive comments opinions suggestions…its very important so please guys… Silent read… I know u all bzy with ur studies and daily life schedule… But please Today I need ur comments so please… Say u need to continue or not… I hope u’ll Will say ur opinion….]( love you guys may be next episode may my last episode… Take care keep reading)

42 comments

  1. Simiyy

    |Registered Member

    Salam Affa api…. it was amazing …. i cany describe it in words how i found it…. please dont end it…. i would love it if you would continue….but i would like it if yiu could show their lifes after marriage …. anyway its upto you…. cant wait for the next one
    ….. post soon…. take care 😘

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Va alaikum Salam… Simiyy… Thank you soo much yaar for supporting… Difficulty I’ll continue… Dea… Ur suggestions is awesome… I’ll try to add yaar… I don’t know I can or not… But I’ll try….love you Dea

  2. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Yrr I was soooo excited for this one……..nd ha me me me…….I want the 2nd part………yrr u you’ll end it…..will miss u….
    Fab episode….pls go with the 2 nd one……..love u yrrrrr

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Adya baby… Ur dp is amazing… Thank you thank you soo for this love… I felt happy that u liked my ff Dea… Gold may bless you… Keep simleing

  3. Sana(sanu)

    Ooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Awesome amazing fabulous fantastic……..

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Seriously I describe all this.. No Dea my ff is not so good… Thank you soo much for encouraging me… Love you… Keep reading

  4. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Affaa di loved it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Too good Loved the episode Twinj part in the room was so enotional and the other one was so sweet 😍😍😍😍
    Aradhika part was also cute Swasan Raglak Nisam Naman all the part were too good 😍😍
    I want you to continue pls πŸ™‡
    Love you 😚
    Post soon

  5. Ranabulbul

    |Registered Member

    Haye meri sweetie di…..it was fan as usual …all couples rocked today…..
    Their romance ufff…I am blushing now…
    And maine bola hi diya hai pehle ki ke I want second part also with their children so …u have to do it for ur anarkali

  6. Panchiii

    |Registered Member

    Wooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww…… awesome yaar ……loved it so much….. it was jst superb,fantastic…… all couples were superb yaar…… plz continue…..

    • Affaa

      |Author

      My baby… Always u makes me blush by ur comments… I don’t know how to thank you for supporting me… Ur just awesome… Keep reading.. Love you

  7. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Wowwww di episode is awesome 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Plz post next soon
    Nd ya start with 2nd season of it
    Plzzzzzzz
    Love uπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  8. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Amazing episode da…loved TwiNj scenes 😍😍😍😍they were emotional and cute…that YuHi and alarm scene was funny bechare yuhi ki first night bigad di πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚waiting for next…post soon…

    Love you darling 😘😘😘😘

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Arti ur my silent Reader… Difficulty I’ll continue Dea… Thank you soo much for commenting today… Thank you for supporting keep reading love you

  9. manu

    Hayee rabbaa how beautifully u had written yar abt each & every pair nice I loved all pairs gud cont dearr…

  10. Malika

    |Registered Member

    Hey affaa don’t you dare to end this ff. I really really love all the scene. I love radhika and arjun scenes it was really cute. Raglak scene was awesome. Swasan scene was superb. And twinj scene was fantastic. Nisam scene was lovely and naman scene was fabulous. You give equal scene for every couples. I love this ff from start. That time I was a silent reader but now if you end this ff I will not spare you. Please please continue it. …… You nail it seriously . You always rock and you know what I’m a following fan of this ff. Each words in this ep was marvellous. You are an amazing and cute writer. Please continue it…… Otherwise my heart will break into pieces seeing such an amazing ff end. I’m very addicted to this ff. And sorry if I didn’t comments on previous ep I was really really busy. ….with my marriage preparation. I want a second part. …..

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Woooooooow❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀
      So beautiful comment… U made me blush… And it’s OK if u can’t comment always…. Today ur comment made my day… So sweet of u yaar… And haa congrats for ur marriage…may God bless you… Stay happy always… I’ll continue it… 😘😘😘😘

    • Affaa

      |Author

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ u liked it… In kerala it’s happens… Thank you for commenting

  11. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Di….I know aapne bola tha ki aap end kardoge but aapne ye bhi bola tha u will come back with season 2…..nd u know na mai kitni ziddi hoon….so soochna vochna kuch nahi its decided u have to come back with d nxt season
    Nd rahi baat iss season ki so ur just 3epi away from 50….toh continue atleast till their na plsssssss…….apki Fathi is requesting u plsssssss

    And aaj ka epi was just😍😍😍…..saare couples indulged in Romance….nd vo twinkle ka cheek kiss was sooo cute…..love d epi

    Love u😘😘❀

  12. vrutika

    superb………………Fida i just loved the ff….aww u r ending the ff…see if u want write further i will be glad to read it……..loved it.
    keep smiling……….stay healthy

    • Affaa

      |Author

      I don’t know yaar I’m really confused by it… Majority to continue it…so I’ll continue.. And haa ur support is very important for me… Thank you soo much vru… Keep reading love you

  13. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Affffffoooooooooooo jaan see u scolded me so much…. But me a shameless creature is still doing the same thing…. U told me to take care of myself nd don’t read ur ff but kya kre yah dil hai ke manta nai…. Nd waise bhi I’m my Affo’s cute si…. Pyari si.. Nanhi si frnd πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…. So mai kaise maan jaun…. Nd u also stop taking tension… I’m fine jaan……

    JAAN…. Ur episode πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—….. Wooooowwwwww yrrrr it was soooo cute….

    Twinj scene… amazing yrr… The way kunj pain was explained by u is so good….. Twinkle on kunj maano mission is a nice move…. Loved itπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡….

    Yuhi scenes… So romantic…. But that alarm clock spoiled the beautiful moment πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…..

    Aradhika scenes…awwww that was so cute…. Arjun taking care of Radhika was so cute….
    Manan…. Raglak… Nd Swasan scenes were amazing…. Awesome yrrr…….

    About ur question… So u Already know my answer…. Nd whatever u will decide I’ll always their to support u jaan….

    LOVE YOU…. YOUR ANGEL.. sayoo…….. M πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ’•πŸ’ŸπŸ’žπŸ’πŸ‘

  14. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    heyyyyyyyyyy api
    asalamoalaikum
    so sorry for being late
    ap i think u shoul end this ff but only if u start new ff as season 2 or new ff
    api it was like ammmmmaaaaaaaazzzzzziiiiinnnngggggg
    cant wait possssstttttt soooooonnnnn
    it was like too gud
    manan scenes were amazing
    twing scene mae me go in suspence
    post soon
    love u more than u love me
    take care api
    my sweet candy
    api ap ko jb b mere yad aae naw to ap ek candy kha liia kro or lazmi dhi mere liye adhi apke liye ok???
    sorry for late ness
    tc
    allahafiz

    • Affaa

      |Author

      My jaan… I miss you…..for remember ur always in my mind… I use think about u my chul bulli.. Love you sooooooo much… Come soon… Take care… Keep simleing… Allah hafiz… And haa I’ll eat candy…

  15. Baby

    |Registered Member

    affaa di it was amaizng episode i loved it 2 core
    i mean all couples were gr8 luvd it n y r u ending it di
    atleast take i till 50 ur golden jubliee…
    n di pls cntinue it wid children i love d way u ryt dare u to end it..
    srsly will miss 7 chummmzzzz….was really attached to it luvd it di u nailed d epsidoe
    i hope twinj soon unyt luv u di…post nxt asap…i cant w8..

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