7 chumzzzzzzz forever (epi-46)

Episode 45

Looo my friends it’s me Affa… I know I’m late… Sorry for that… OK here we go for my episode…

Continues ….

OK guys I’ll clear all doubts…
Frist I’ll start from mansion… After three years…
Radika is sitting in front of mirror and dreaming something… From back sam: what ur dreaming Radhu…
Nandini : don’t u know… She is dreaming Arjun sir.. Leave it and say how I’m looking..
Ragini : beautiful… Please help me to wear this lehenga..
Sam: chumzzzzzzz please say… Where is braid…
Swara: see I’m here…
Radika : not u… Where is she…
Twinkle: ohhh God…
Swara: what happened.. Twinkiii…
Twinkle points her hand towards bed…

Swara howls:haaa…
Chumzzzzzzz: what happened.. Twinkiii and shona…
Radika : OMG… Mahi.. Ur still sleeping…
Nandini pours water on Mahi…
Mahi in jerks she wake ups: what happened chumzzzzzzz…
Sam: asking to us what happened… One hours left… For marriage… Ur sleeping…
Mahi: who’s marriage…
Swara : ur dadi’s…
Ragini: shona… Oh God Mahi… ur marriage…

Mahi keeps her hand on her head: ohhh shittt… What uvi will think about me…
Chumzzzzzzz: we beg u… Please get ready asap…
Mahi: Ya… She runs to wash room…
Chumzzzzzzz moves to Balcony…
Ragini: how fast… Three years passed… Radika: in this year’s many things have been changed.. But only one didn’t change…
Sam: what is that…
Twinkle: our love towards each other… Nandini: after few hours.. Mahi will also get married…
Swara: Twinkiii… What about u..
Twinkiii: I waited for kunj…. this years to say sorry… But he didn’t came… May be he hates me… But I want to say sorry after that I’ll start my new life..
Radika: may he settled in Australia… Hope he will come today…

Ragini : he didn’t came for our marriage… Hope he will come today…
Nandini: I’m sure.. He will come…
Twinkle had a simle on her face: may be Lia will also with him …
Suddenly Radika starts to vomit…
Chumzzzz: what happened Radhu…
Radika : don’t know guys… Feeling something strange…
Twinkle: wait I’ll bring hot water…
Nandini in teasing Tone: Radhu….. Ur not planning give a baby…
Radika : what baby.. Stop it Nandu…
Ragini : ohhh my God… Bua I’m bua…
Radika : nothing like that…
Sam : Radhu…

Twinkle: congrats… Dea… God bless…
Swara : guys please say.. What is going on…
Ragini: I’ll call doctor..
Radika : no need… I’m fine…
Nandini: chuppp… Ek them chuppp.. Laddooo u call doctor…
Swara : please say… Yaar… Please…
Sam: shona.. Wait let doctor come…

Mahi: what is going haa…
Doctor comes…
Mahi in tensed : what happened to Radhu…
Doctor :congrats Radika… She is pregnant..
Ragini in happy hugs doctor: thank you so much doctor…

Nandini: laddooo… What are you doing…
Ragini: sorry doctor… Doctor leaves…
Chumzzzzzzz hugs Radika and pleats kiss on her cheek…
Radika was blushing.. Her face was like tomato…
Swara in confused: but how Radhu…
Nandini: what question ur asking… Ask to sanskar he will give u answer…
Swara: stop it yaar… Really Radhu… We can’t explain.. How happy we’re…
Twinkle: Ohh God… Radhu we can’t control our happiness…
Ragini: thank you soo much Bhabi…
Nandini keeps her head on Radika’s stomach: ya I can hear baby sound…
Sam: ohh stop Nandu…now we can’t hear anything…
Mahi: u made… This day very special…
Radika: enough… Chumzzzzzzz get ready… Baraat will come now….
Swara: ha… Come let’s move…
After one hour…
Chumzzzzzzz was ready… They’re waiting Baraat …
( OK now I’ll say what they’re wearing)
[Ragini is wearing black and golden half saree… With long
mangalsutra, Manng tikka.. She was looking beautiful…
Swara is wearing blue lehenga … She left her hair open….she also had mangalsutra,manng Tikka…. She was looking so cute and pretty…
Mahi she is braid… She was looking different from others…in Red and white color combination lehenga…she didn’t left gap in her hand… she applied mahandi… Her manng Tikka was superb… Bangles… She was outstanding in braid out fit…

Twinkle was looking very hot and amazing… In pink lehenga she left her hair.. A simple manng Tikka…
Nandini were peach and silver combination lehenga… She did light makeup… She twisted her hair… Sha had a cute mangalsutra on her neck… Looking stunning and attractive…
Radika was looking like a angel in Golden lehenga… She left her hair open.. Her face was glowing… Her manng Tikka was beautiful… Totally she was looking awesome…
Sam in green lehenga with dark lipstick.. Cute manng Tikka… Long mangalsutra … Simply makeup… She was looking marvelous…..]

Radika was lot in her world… Chumzzzzzzz was waiting for boys… Mahi was walking here and there bcoz of nervousness…
Chumzzzzzzz : offo Mahi… What are your going… For last one hour… Ur walking here and there… Come and sit here… We are with you… Don’t worry…
Mahi: chumzzzzzzz.. I’m looking good…
Swara: no not good… Ur looking beautiful…
Chumzzzzzzz : haa… (They hugs Mahi) don’t worry…
Suddenly one girls Comes to room..
Girl: Mahi di… Baraat came….

Swara: awww…
Ragini: bhaiya will be happy… After knowing good news…
Twinkle runs to balcony to see kunj…
Nandini was bzy in doing make up..
Sam: don’t worry Mahi… Take long breath and leave u will feel better…
Uvi was looking like princess… In Red and white color shervani… With golden turban… He was looking like a princess…
Laksh was wearing golden color shervani…he was looking dashing…
Arjun was wearing back coat with white shirt… He was looking hot in coat…
Sanskar was wearing blue shervani with sliver touch designs… He was looking dashing….
Kunj was wearing pink half coat with white shirt.. He was looking like a hero.. Very handsome..
Last our Manik who is wearing black shervani with red shall… She was hot in shervani…
Boys was dancing.. Naggin dance…
But Arjan was very tensed…
Boys: Sir… No need to worry… Radika will be fine… And girls are also with her nah…
Arjun: haa hope so…

Boys : then simle… Enjoy… Please sir…
Arjun simles…
Mahi’s mom does Arthi… And welcomes them…
Arjun sees girls…. He runs towards them…
Arjun in tensed to Ragini: princesses…. where is Radika…. What happened to her…
Ragini: ohh u don’t know what happened to her… Stop ur acting bhaiya…
Arjun: princesses believe me.. I don’t know what happened to her… When u messaged I was dying to see her…
Ragini: now she is in this situation only bcoz of bhaiya…
Swara: we didn’t expected this for u sir…
Nandini: poor Radhu… Arjun: stop it and say what happened to her…
Ragini: we’re not going say… Radhu will say…
Arjun : OK where is she…
Ragini: in room…
Arjun runs to room…

Chumzzzzzzz laughs…
In room…
Radika was standing near window..
Arjun: Radika… What happened to u…
(he checks whether she has fever) no u not have fever…
Radika: simles…
Arjun : Radika… Please say what happened to u… I’m dying…
Radika hugs him…
Arjun breaks her hug and cupps her face: please say… Radika…
Radika keeps his hand on her stomach…
Anjrn : u have stomachache…
Radika : no..
Anjun : then…
Radika : can u feel something…
Anjun : no…
Radika hugs him and moves close to his ear… ( in low voice Radika…with a blushing face) :someone coming to call you papa…
Arjun was shocked for a second… He breaks hug: What you said..
Radika had a bright simle on her face…
Arjun : ohh God… Radika.. I’m…. U… I mean our…. I can’t believe…
(he lifts her)
Radika was surprised : Arjan… What are u doing…
Arjan : Radika… Thank you soo much…
(he eyes was filled with tears… He lands Radika slowly)
Radika : haiiii…. ( she wipes his tears)
Arjan cupps her face: I can’t explain how happy I’m… Ur the angel in my life… Who filled my life with happiness… In this world I’m the most happy person…
Radika holds his shoulder: thank you Arjan… For loving me like this… Thank you for coming to my life…. I love you Arjan…
Arjan moves close to her pleats kiss on her forehead…
From back Ragini clears her throat: may I Come in…
Arjan opens his arms for Ragini…

Ragini and hugs him : congrats Bhaiya… Radhu I need small Cute princesses like me…
Arjan: Radika no… I no need baby like her … I can’t bear her itself…
Ragini makes puppy face…
Arjun : ohh… I was joking….my princesses is the best …
Radika: haa… My laddooo is the best…
Ragini: I’m leaving… They may searching for me…

Ragini leaves from their…
In hall…
Chumzzzz and boys…
Boys: ohh ohh looking very beautiful in lehengas…
Chumzzz: ur also not bad…
Laksh: where is Twinkle…
Nandini : she with Mahi… In room…
Sam : where is Kunj… Sanskar: kunj is outside… He will come now..
Uvi was very excited to meet Mahi: girls where is Mahi..
Swara : offfo uvi be patient… She will come just now…
Nandini : loo she came… Uvi’s princesses…
Mahi was really looking like princesses… She was blushing by seeing uvi…
Uvi was not able take off his eyes from her… Hi was mesmerize by seeing her….
They makes uvi and Mahi to sit…uvi holds Mahi’s hand…
Mahi in low voice: uvi I’m very nervous…
Uvi: why… Ur looking beautiful…
Mahi blushes…
Radika: twinkii please bring that rose petals …
Twinkle: OK… Radhu…
Kunj enters to hall…
Twinkle didn’t notice kunj… Kunj was bzy in his phone…
Suddenly twinkle slips bcoz of her lehenga… Kunj holds her waist…
After a few second.. Twinkle opens her eyes… She understood that she safe in someone’s arms… We was shocked to see kunj… All rose petals Falls on them… Kunj was lot in her… They had very romantic eye lock….
Chumzzzzzzz : kunj…
They breaks eye lock… They both comes to scene…
Twinkle was not able to face him bcoz of guilty…
Kunj with a sweet simle: hai girls… How are you all…
Chumzz : u didn’t come to our marriage… It’s too bad..
Kunj : really sorry for that…
Chumzz : kunj… We will come just now…
Chumzz leaves…
Twinkle was about to go…
Kunj : hii… Twinkle…
Twinkle’s eyes was filled with tears..before she say anything chumzzzzzzz calls her…
She moves…
Suddenly lights goes off…
Spot light falls on chumzzzzzzz…
They was facing back….
Song plays…
( Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna
Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna
Lene tujhe o gori
Aayenge tere sajna
Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna)
Girls dance on that song… It was beautiful dance… Mahi was simleing at her chumzzzzzzz…
Chumzzzzzzz dance ends…
Spot light falls boys.. Song plays( Tere mathe kee bindiya chamakatee rahe Tere hathon kee mehandee mehakatee rahe Tere jode kee raunak salamat rahe Teree choodi hamesha khanakatee rahe Mubarak mubarak mubarak mubarak….. Mubarak ho tumko yeh shadee tumharee… Sada khush raho tum duwa hai hamaree Tumhare kadam chume yeh duneeya saree….. Sada khush raho tum duwa hai hamaree Mubarak ho tumko yeh shadee tumharee Sada khush raho tum duwa hai hamaree)
Boys hugs uvi…
Uvi’s mom : it’s for time for marriage…
Uvi forwards his hand … Mahi holds his and moves towards Mandap… Mandap was beautifully decorated… With white and red flowers…
Uvi puts warmalla to Mahi… Mahi puts warmalla to Uvi… Mahi’s dad does kaniyadaan…
They Sands for satphere….
Uvi holds her hand…
Mahi and uvi takes the first step of the seven vows to pledge that they would provide a prospered living for the household or the family that they would look after and avoid those that might hinder their healthy living…..
During the second step of the seven pheras, Mahi and uvi promise each other that they would develop their physical, mental and spiritual powers in order to lead a lifestyle that would be healthy.
During the third vow, they promises to earn a living
and increase by righteous and proper means, so that their materialistic wealth increases manifold…..
While taking the fourth vow, they looks at each and pledges to acquire knowledge, happiness and harmony by mutual love, respect, understanding and faith.
The fifth vow is taken to have expand their heredity by having children, for whom, they will be responsible. They also pray to be blessed with healthy, honest and brave children….

While taking the sixth step around the sacred fire, they both prays for self-control of the mind, body and soul and longevity of their marital relationship.
the seventh and the last vow, they promise that they would be true and loyal to each other and would remain companions and best of friends for the lifetime…..
Thier satphere’s ends…
Now uvi fills her manng by sindoorr… Mahi close her eyes… He makes her to wear mangalsutra …
All claps for them… Now they become one… They had both bright simle…
They went to have food…
Chumzzzzzzz : Mahi u didn’t had anything from morning go and have something… After that bidaai is also have to do…
Uvi : haa Mahi come… Ragini : Radhu… U also have dinner… And take rest…
Radika : no way my Mahi’s marriage… I will stay here…
Arjan: if ur not hungry… My baby will be hungry… U have to for her…
Radika : but..
Boys : haa… Radika u need to take care of yourself…
They both leaves…
Sanskar : girls.. Where is shoe…
Swara shows her leg : my shoe is here…
Manik : we not asking this…
Nandini : ohhh ur asking my shoe… It’s in room…
Neil : stop ur drama…
Sam : OK I’ll say…
Neil: good girl… Say… Sam : my shoe is on my leg..
Laksh : very funny…
Ragini : thank you soo much…
Laksh : girls say where is uvi’s shoe…

Ragini : ohhh that…
Swara : u would have asked before itself… Sam: we thought our shoe…
Nandini : tum log bhi nah…
Boys in anger : we asking where is shoe…
Girls : OK we will say…
Swara says it’s under table…..
Nandini says it’s on cabored…
Sam says it’s on car… Ragini says it’s on balcony…
Boys was confused: OK…
Laksh:girls then come with us to that place… If we didn’t find Thier… We’ll show who we are… He drags Ragini’s
Ragini : laksh… U go..
Laksh takes her to balcony…

Neil : come with to near car…
Sam in her mind : God please save me…
Manik : Nandini come…
Nandini : no… I’m not coming…
Manik : I said… Come…
Nandini :no…
Manik takes her in his arms…
Nandini : Manik leave me
Manik takes near cabored..
Swara : Sanskar… Belive… I’m feeling to vomit…
Sanskar : seriously…
Swara : haa Sanskar… I think I’m beginning mother…
Sanskar : ohhh really… Congrats… Stop ur drama and come with Me…
Sanskar started to search under the table… He tied swara’s hand to pillar…
Swara : Sanskar… Please leave me…
Sanskar : swara… Be quite…
He finished searching…
Sanskar moves towards swara in anger: swara… Where is shoe…
Swara : vo… Did you searched that table…
Sanskar moves close to her…
Swara tightly close her eyes…
Sanskar frees her hand…
Swara opens her eyes and simles : I know my Sanskar… Will never do anything… OK I’m going…
Sanskar holds her hand and pulls close to her…
Swara : Sanskar… What are you doing…
Sanskar holds her bear waist…
Swara: Sanskar…
Sanskar :swara…. Where is shoe…
Swara : I don’t know… He pulls her even more close to him… He was about to kiss her lips..
Swara : OK OK… I will say …
Sanskar : where…

Swara pushes him and runs from Thier…
Sanskar : swara… Tum… I’ll teach you…
While running swara : which lesson…
Sanskar simles to himself she never going to change…
Near car…
Neil : Sam…i can’t find any shoe…
Sam : ohh… Haa I forgot… Shoe is not here… It’s on my bag…
Neil : ohh… Seriously… Sam: haa.. I forgot to say… Wait I’ll bring it now…
She was about to go… He holds dupatta…
Neil : I’ll not leave…
Sam: please leave me…
Neil : no…

Sam : I don’t know… Where is shoe…
Neil : OK I’ll leave you…
Sam :thank you soo much….
Neil : before that I need… Kiss…
Sam : what!!kiss… Now impossible…
Neil : OK… I’m no going to leave…
Sam : I’ll give you later …
Neil : no..
Sam pleats kiss on his cheek: now let me go…
Neil holds waist : Sam I’m ur husband… Why ur blushing like this…
Sam : that u will not understand…
Neil kiss on her cheek: it’s return gift…
Sam : I’m going…

She moves…
In room…
Manik was searching for shoe… But Nandini bzy in her make up…
Manik : Nandini… It’s not here…
Nandini she didn’t care him…
Manik : Nandini… I’m asking… U something…
Nandini : Manik… It’s there… U will get it… I’m going u search it … If you got then call me…
Manik : Nandini… Be serious…
Nandini : Manik… Don’t worry we will give shoe… Before that we need gifts from uvi…
Manik : ohh u need gifts… Right I’ll give…
Nandini : really…
Manik : haa…
Nandini : okk… Then give… She forwards her hand…
He moves close to her… He starts to tickle her…
Nandini : haaii manik what are you doing… She was laugh non stop…
Manik : say where is shoe…
Nandini : frist u stop tickling me…
Manik : ur my wife… I don’t believe u…
Nandini : promise… I’ll tell you… Please stop…
Manik stops : OK say…..
Nandini : in sky…
Manik looks up…
Nandini runs from there….
Manik : Nandini… Shittt… Sorry uvi…im helpless…
In balcony…
Laksh : Ragini….. Where is shoe…
Ragini : vo…. Haa…
Laksh : what… Vo… Haa…
Ragini : sorry laksh… I can’t say u where is shoes…
Laksh : why…
Ragini : I promised to chumzzzzzzz… I can’t break their promise…
Laksh simles at her… He moves towards her and cupps her face: Ragini ur soo pure… Like gold…. I’m really blessed to have life partner like u…
Ragini huge him : even me… Sorry I can’t help…
Laksh : but we promised uvi… We will find his… Shoe…
Ragini breaks hug : then… All the very best…
Laksh : OK my sweetheart… He plates kiss on her forehead…
Laksh leaves from there…
Ragini blushes…
In hall
All was ready for bidaai….
Mahi holds chumzzzzzzz hand….
Her mom and dad was beside her…
Before she crossing the doorstep the Mahi is given a handful of rice, which she is required to throw over her head behind her as she leaves. This is supposed to symbolize a repayment to her parents for all that they have given her throughout the years……Mahi was crying while doing this…

She cross doorstep…
She hugs her dad… And cries like a small baby… Her dad was not able to control his tears…
He keeps his hand on her head : Jaan Se Bhi Zyada Tujhe Pyar Kiya Hai…Umr Bhar Isi Din Ka Intzaar Kiya Hai Maine….
Tu Aaj Ke Din Labo’n Ki Hansi Kam Na Kar…Meri Gudiya! Aaj Hargiz Aankh Nam Na Kar….

Khusiyo’n Bhari Ye Raat, Mubarak Ho Tujhe….Naye Jeewan Ki Shuru’aat,….
Tere Baghair Ab To Ye Ghar Bhi Paraaya Hoga…Ab Is Ghar Mein Bas Teri Yaad Ka Saaya Hoga….
Maa-Baap Ye Jeewan Me Ye Din Bhi Aata Hai….Jigar Ka Tudka Hi Ek Din Door Ho Jata Hai….Naye Rishton Ki Ye Saugaat Mubarak Ho Tujhe………meri bacchi….( He pleats kiss on her forehead… He wipes her tears…) miss u beta….
Mahi : papa… I don’t want leave… This house… I don’t want leave u all..
From back her mom with a sad simle: one day… Every daughter have to leave their house… Don’t crying my baby… What happened if we miss…. Ur always our daughter…. And haa Saas Ki Ijjat Karna Kynki Ab Wo Hi Maa Hai Ab Teri….Tu Khush Rahe Aabad Rahe Ye Hai Ab Dua Meri….( she kiss on her cheek)
Mahi hugs her mom : mom…. ( she cries)
Her bhaiya :enough enough my doll…. Saying goodbye to us by tears haa…. Is Ghar Ko Chhod Kar Ja Rahi Hu Apne Pyar Ke Ghar..Khatam Hua Ek Safar , Ab Aage Dusra Safar He….. I’ll miss you my doll… Stay blessed always…
Mahi : I miss to u bhaiya…
Chumzzzzzzz was also crying by remember their bidaai…. Chumzzzzzzz gives uvi’ s shoe: uvi..we no need gifts ….only we need is ur promise… That you will give all happiness to our Mahi… U’ll never let tears drop from her eyes … She is so good…
Chumzzzzzzz pushes Mahi to uvi’s arm : take our Mahi… She is urs…
Uvi : I promise…
They all leaves from their to uvi’s house… Mahi did griha pravesh…
All where sitting in hall…
Chumzzzzzzz : twinkiii… Please can you bring… Mahi’s gift from that room…
Twinkle : OK… Wait I’ll bring it….
Chumzzzzzzz simles each other….
Boys: kunj…. Where is ur phone…
Kunj : my phone… Haa I give to Manik…
Manik : haa I forgot… It’s on that room…
Kunj : guys… I’ll bring it…
Kunj moves to that room…
Chumzzzzzzz and boys gives hifi and laughs…
In room….
Twinkle was bzy in searching gifts… Twinkle to herself : ohh God where is this gifts…
Kunj enters to room….
Twinkle in her mind : I think it’s not here….
They both didn’t notice each other…
(Someone locks the door from outside…)
She was about to go…. She hitts kunj… She fallsmmm kunj’s holds hand…
A smooth wind blows on them… Her hair hitts his face….
Kunj clears his face…. And leaves her hand…
Kunj turns to go….
Twinkle : hiiii… Kunj…
Kunj: hiiii….

Twinkle: kunj…
Kunj : sorry by mistake…. I came here…
Twinkle : vo Mai…
Suddenly lights goes off….
Twinkle was secard…. Kunj : twinkle…. Don’t worry I’m here…
He holds her hand…
Twinkle’s eyes was filled…
Kunj : twinkle… Ur fine nah….
Twinkle was not able to speak… Because her words was stacked…..
Twinkle hugs him…..
( Tere sang yaara

Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

Kunj hugs her tightly…. Her tears drops to her chest….
Twinkle : kunj…. I’m sorry…. I don’t have right to ask sorry I know you not able to forgive me… For spoiling ur life…but Kunj last three year… I had only one wish to meet you once… I’m really sorry kunj… I know i Hurted u a lot… My words… I made our relation a fun…Sorry I really mine it … When I came to know about all truth it was very late… That Lia played beautiful game… For that I give you punishment…. (she joints her hand in front of him) I’m really sorry… Kunj…
Kunj in teared eyes hugs her…
O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai….. Tujhpe marke hi toh…. Mujhe jeena aaya hai
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitar
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaun
Jo tu karde is hard plays)
Suddenly twinkle remembers… That now kunj is not her… Twinkle breaks hug and moves away from him…
Twinkle with a feck simle : kunj… How is Lia…
Kunj was shocked by her question… He moves towards her…. He hardly pins her to wall..in anger : seriously Twinkle….. Do you think I can live without… Do you think my love for you was just for a show off…. This last three years I was dying…. Each day only ur memories was straight for me… Only my pillow knows value of my tears… ( he keeps her hand on his chest ) my heart still beats for u twinkle… Only for… I love you more than before…. But u… How can u think that I can live without you….
Twinkle : kunj… Vo Mai…

To be continued…

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39 comments

  1. Ashnoor

    Awesome and all are married except twinkle and kunj. πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰Going to be mother Radhu and going to be father arjun a very biggggggπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰
    Congo πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚.

  2. Ranabulbul

    |Registered Member

    Awwwwwwwww…
    Meri sweetie di…
    Epi was so sweet and long….
    Main Aapke likhne pe FIDA hun..
    I love u …
    Ur anarkali was dying to read it and now its here…
    Mavi manan seil…swasan raglak…aradhika scenes were so so cute …
    And mere twinj….haye ..finally tw ko thodi akal aai ….
    But koi ni Aap ho to no fear …
    Ab ek hi request post soon..
    Love from ur anarkli

  3. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding episode, Ardhika are having a baby, so happy for them, is Kunj married? Eagerly waiting for the next update. πŸ™‚

  4. vrutika

    fida u really know how to make my day………..I read this when i get tired studying and need break and u know what i feel so fresh after this……it was fabulous….i could feel each and everything happening before my eyes……lovely……
    keep going………….
    keep smiling………………..

  5. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Hosh udd gaye mere toh Miss Fida
    Hosh udd gaye
    Main dusre jagat mein udd gayi
    Main dusre duniya mein ja basi
    Haye aap kya jaano kis tarah se aapne mere hosh udaaye hai
    Aap hume kripya kar apne kuch tips de..
    Hum dhanya honge
    Aagya chahte hai aaj
    Tata bye bye
    Love u😘

  6. Adya

    |Registered Member

    What a comeback affa…….,loved twinj part Yrr……..Nd that shoe part was amazingly written……….. superb ………

  7. Dheemahee

    U know affa from the first episode of your ff till today this ff is the most remarkable and afresh in my memory u know I love your ff very much . I m na thodi selfish so ab wait nai hota please post next one soon please and u r rocking it dear now hamara twinj kono jaldi jaldi milla do . Love u and waiting for your next episode …. Bye .

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Thank you yaar such a beautiful comment…. I don’t know what spl have in my worst ff… Seriously u never felt it boring… Sorry yaar I started to write my next epi I’ll do it ASAP… Thank you soo much for for supporting me… Love you Dea

  8. Simiyy

    |Registered Member

    Affa Api it was absolutly amazing…..
    I loved each and every part especially Swaras childish behaviour…. i feel that twinkle is engaged or is going to get engaged or married to someone else… i hope twinj reunite soon…. take care and post soon eagerly waiting

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Ohhh u called me api…..i felt very good.. Sooooooo happy… Ur comment made me blush.. Thank you soo much for supporting Dea… Allah may bless u….and I’ll do it.. Nothing like… How twinkle can forget her kunj… Love you Dea

  9. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Di awesome Loved it :0 I loved each and every bit of your ff πŸ™‚ Too good and the Twinj part was I swear The best πŸ™‚ Thank god the misunderstandings got cleared and Sawasan Part was fun, Raglan part was sweet and Aradhika part -Arjun was such a dum when he said you have a stomachache But so sweet and Manan part was also cute In short I loved the whole episode an d how can I forget the married couple Yuhi they were awesome πŸ™‚
    Love you πŸ™‚

  10. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    DiiiiiiiiiπŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€
    Episode is mind blowing
    I want to read more
    Plzzz jaldi upload karna
    It’s awesome
    Loved it
    Jaldi upload karna
    Ur ff is oh lalalaaaaa
    Love u❀️

  11. Dheemahee

    |Registered Member

    hi affa u know what your ff is one of my favourite from the first episode of it i love it a lot please post next one soon as soon as possible please u known na curiosity problem hahahaha… chalo bye now see u soon with next episode.

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Thank you yaar such a beautiful comment…. I don’t know what spl have in my worst ff… Seriously u never felt it boring… Sorry yaar I started to write my next epi I’ll do it ASAP… Thank you soo much for for supporting me… Love you Dea

  12. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Affaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa thoda bada ho gaya na okay I’m having words lacking problem…kya likha hai yaar…how u manage to write so well giving importance to every couple…TwiNj scenes were amazing loved it to the core 😘😘😘😘😘❀❀❀❀ desperately waiting for next episode…jaldi post karna…

    Allah Hafiz
    Love you 😘😘😘

  13. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Di…..how do u manage to write such a long one that too so well that I am always left speechless

    Super Amazing epi…..loved each nd every bit of it spcly that sromachachπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ROFL……..Fabulous piece of writing
    Continue soon

    Love uπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•

  14. Sindhu_Varma

    |Registered Member

    Hayee
    A rocking episode nd finally twinkle realised her mistake
    And Radhi is mom wow ❀️❀️
    So kinj accepted her apology ?
    Upload soon 😊😊

  15. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Afffooooooooooooooooooooooo …….my Afflaloo ….. since morning u r making me blush with ur cute words….. sometimes through ur words nd sometimes through ur cute voice u make my day ….but today along with that ur ff made me soo happy……

    First tell me the secret behind ur amazing writing skills….how do u manage to handle too long episode so beautifully…..πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’πŸ’….

    Each nd every scenes were exceptionally amazing…. awesome…the best part was of Swasan cute romance…..
    I’m really happy for Aradhika ….Nd others couple romance was also so adorable….

    Felt bad for Twinj…..I really felt so painful seeing my Twinj suffering…but I know very soon u will make everything fine between them…..

    Finally Affo ……u know how much I love you….we always end up fighting if we discuss that who loves whom more but just remember one thing ur Sayoo is always their to act as ur shadow….a shadow can never be separated from its soul…….
    I nd u r more than a siblings…. moreover we have already planned for our next birth…..do remember my demands that how my Afflaloo should lookπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚….

    Accha ….biieeeee……aree biiee only for TU coz I can never say biee to u coz throughout whole life I will irritate u with my chatter box….

    Love you….. love you more than u love me😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Affaa

      |Author

      Subha… I was thinking about… I thought u stopped reading my ff… After seeing ur comment.. I felt so happy that I describe… Thank you thank you… For commenting.. Keep reading love you

  16. Affaa

    |Author

    Purnima… Yaar thank you soo much… In few lines u says many things to me…. Ur comments always makes my day.. Yaar thank you soo much for reading my… For supporting for encouraging… Love you… Dea

  17. Mahi13

    |Registered Member

    Apiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii how r u????? The update was rocking. I hope twinj’ll be together soon. Api sorry for the late comment. Actually I was out of Dhaka so that’s y couldn’t comment. The fights over shoe was funny. Chumzzzzzzz attempt to hide the shoe from boys was really funny. Take care n update ASAP. Love u api.

  18. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    Heyyyyyyyyy api the epi was like hell amazing it was ammmmmmmmaaaaZzzzzzzzziiiiiiinnnnnggggggg
    A pi plz post asap I wanna see towing scenes so plzzzzzzzz post soon if u can
    And sorry for being late
    Plzzz post soon
    Aradhika scene were amazing
    But ache the I liked it
    Plzzzz post asap
    Take care
    Love u

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