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7 chumzZzZzz for ever (Epi-11)

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Episode 10

continue…..
Laksh puts chit…..Nile takes and give to laksh
Laksh:here is question for u…..
Whom you most hate in your life…
Nile:I hate person who gives pain to my loved ones…..I hate that person…
Nile: puts the chit….Mahi takes and gives to Nile……
Nile:question…. what you want to see you’re life long….
Mahi:I went to see…. chumzz happiness…
Everyone:wooo
Mahi puts chit Sam picks and gives to Mahi
Mahi:question for you…. What is most beautiful in this world..
Sam:most beautiful mmmm eyes…. Our eyes is most beautiful thing in this world….
Sam puts chits…. sanskar picks and give to Sam…
Sam:question for u….If you got opportunity to ask something to someone what you like to ask?….
Sanskar:sorry from swara…….swara I am really very sorry for making u cry Bcoz of me .swara I really mine it…
Sam:poor sanskar…. swara pls forgive him na…
Swara feels sad:ok I forgived u…
Sanskar:yeeeeee…
Thank you so much….

Sanskar puts the chit….. nadhni picks and gives to sanskar…
Sanskar:here is Ur question….If you got a opportunity to make something good what could you like to do…
Nadhni:I would have made Manik to stop playing with girls feelings…. and I will do it definitely…
Uvi:that’s good idea….
Nadhni puts chit swara picks and gives to nadhni…
Nadhni:here is Ur question….
If you have next birth what you like to have same has this birth….
Swara:if I have next birth… I will ask to give my 7 chumzz Back…
Every one- ohhhh
Swara:so this last question for Ragini…. Swara:question
What u want to change in your life…
Ragini:I want to change my faith….
Swara:why. … what happen to Ur faith.
Chumzz :ha Ragini…. are you hiding something from us…
Ragini:no yarr….. live it..
Swara:Mahi what is time now….
Mahi: 5:00pm…..
Swara:oh god….friends today we enjoyed a lot…. Thanks for making my day so spl….
Sanskar:swara come I will trop you….
Swara:no thanks…
Sanskar:ok…. Ur wish.
Ragini:buy chumzz… buy boys… buy laksh
Nile:spl buy….. for laksh
Sam:ha ha Ragini…
Buy everyone laughs.

Night at Ragini home…..
Ragini’s phone rings.
Ragini:hello swara
Swara:hello ragini…. how r u..
Ragini:I am fine… what happen….. why did you called me..
Swara:ragini what happened…. to ur voice are u crying..
Ragini:no who told,am fine…
Swara:don’t lie… ragini I can feel ur tears…
Ragini:no yarr….nothing like that…..
Swara:pls say Ragini….
Ragini:swara…. (her control had lost…… she started to cry)
Swara:what happened my dear…. why r u crying…. pls don’t cry…. wait I will connect chumzz .
Ragini:no swara… they will be sad
Swara:pls say what happened any problem in ur home….
Ragini:wo swara….. my Bro today striked me and told to get out .
Swara:what are you joking…how he can do this with his own sister…..
Ragini:but in our house it’s common…Every day they use to punish me…
Swara:what the hell but why ragini..
Ragini:I have no complaints about it…… but felt sad bcoz when my Bro was striking me my mom and dad didn’t told single word to bro….
Swara:oh god…. Ragini how are you bearing all this….. dea pls don’t cry your chumzz are alway with you….I will say this to chumzz…
Ragini:pls no swara. ….. bcoz me they should not be sad
Swara:but Ragini….
Ragini:pls promise me…
Swara:ragini pls try to understand…
Ragini:no….. bcoz of my fight they should not sad…..
Swara:ok….. I will not say.
Ragini:buy love you.
Swara: love so much….. dea buy…take care…
The call ends…
Swara to her self sorry Ragini…. I have to say this to chumzz…..i know your hiding something from us…..we want to find out that…..oh god time 11:00 morning 6:00 clock I want to college…..

Morning in college…
Ragini:Nadhni what is time now…
Nadhni:time 5:45
Twinkle:we reached very early…
Nadhni:no problem…let’s go for walk…..
Ragini:ok .
Laksh:hi girls….
Ragini:hi laksh..
Nadhni:twinkle come I want to say some thing….
Twinkle:ok say….
Nadhni:not here…
Twinkle:why you can’t say here itself
Ragini:Ha Nadhni…. what is problem here…
Nadhni:nothing yarr… Ragini u stay here it self….twinkle come fast….
Twinkle:ok
Laksh:what happened for them…
Ragini:I don’t know….
Laksh:come let’s go for walk….
Ragini:ok laksh you didn’t told me….. about ur family…
Laksh:my family…. my sweet mom my papa and my big brother. Small cute middle class family…
Ragini:so sweet .
They were walking in road..
Suddenly on truck comes…In front of ragini
Laksh:Ragini…..He pulls her…Ragini are you okay he hugs her if something happen to u then I….
(He stops) are you okay. ……come let’s go back to college… (Ragini were just looking at him)

In class….
Nadhni:do u observed that laksh likes Ragini…
Twinkle:who told..
Nadhni:u did see he cares for her….
Twinkle:is it
Sam:ha….. your right Nadini….. me too thought about it….by the I think kunj also likes….
Twinkle:what kunj also like Ragini…. no way…..
Sam:why twinkle…
Nadhni:bcoz he likes twinkle…
Twinkle was blushing: stop it guys…
Mahi:hi chumzz.
Ragini came to class….
Ragini:hi Mahi hi Sam were is Radika and Swara….
Mahi – Radika went to arjun sirs cabin. Swara may be on the way .
Arjun sirs cabin
Radika: sir may I coming….
Arjun: yes coming
Radika:sir vo yesterday my….
Arjun: ha… what happened….yesterday
Radika:my earing had lost here…. can I search for it
Arjun: ok…..
Radika started to search earing….by mistake she hits arjun and arjun was about fall radika holds his hand
Arjun(in anger he pulls her towards him):what is your problem….He pulls her more close to him…..They had deep romantic eye lock….
Radika:I am really sorry sir…by mistake
(she saw her earing) sir my earing….
Thank you so much….
Arjun(was enjoying her childish):Radika…Ragini and Mahi didn’t signed in their certificates……call them….
Radika:yes…sir

In class room….
Radika:Ragini, Mahi Arjun sir is calling u guys…come with me…
They goes from their…
Sam:Twinkle Nadini come let’s go for a coffee. ..
Twinkle: ok come…
Nadini: I have no mood for coffee….I will stay in class….
Sam:ok….
Manik comes to class…
Manik:hi Nadini…
Nadini was bzy in her phone….
Manik:Nadini did you forgot something….
Nadini:no…. why.
Manik:but I forgot to give…
Nadini: what…..
Manik goes close to her:kiss….
Nadini:kiss….Manik it’s was by mistake…
Manik:but I don’t want your kiss…I want to return it back….
Nadini tight liped….
Manik goes more close to her….Nadini close her eyes…manik kiss on her cheek….. (Nadini were blushing by his kiss)
Manik:it’s enough for today ( and he keeps his hand on his heart oh god what happened to me I feeling happy by kissing her)
Girls comes to class back…..
Mahi:were is that Swara. …..
Radika:may be on the way. …
Twinkle:if sheis still sleeping… then Arjun sir is going to kill her .
Sam: will call her….
Swara’s phone rings.
Swara (in sleepy tone): ha Radika what happened….why you disturbing me……
Sam:Swara are you sleeping…. oh god .
(Nadhni says put in loudspeaker)Nadhni: Swara come fast every one is waiting for u…
Swara:but y
Ragini:you don’t know…..today your marriage…. u forgot about it…
Swara: marriage…. who told today is my marriage your joking na….
Mahi:Swara look what is time now……
Swara:5:50am……. what 5: 50am oh shit…. What chumzz u can’t you call me before it self…….buy
Nadhni: lazy girl….
Sam:we have to wait for Swara….
Ragini:u r right…..Sam…. we should not live her alone….

In ground….
Arjun: were is this girls.
Manik:they might be sleeping in class room…
Uvi:no yarr….They may be on the way…..
In campus…..
Swara:oh god….today Arjun sir is going to kill me….(she was running)
Suddenly she slip…she was about to fall…Sanskar holds her waist….
Sanskar:Swara….
She didn’t reply….
Sanskar:Swara….are you…ok
Swara:haaaa my leg….
Sanskar:what happened. …..let me look…
Swara :no thanks ( she try to wake) but she again slips….
Sanskar lifts her in his arm…
Swara:Sanskar…leave. .
Sanskar:shut up….
Swara was enjoy this moment…..
Sanskar:pattaka…
Swara:don’t call me pattaka…
Sanskar:then what should I call you…
Swara: Swara…
Sanskar:ok…Swara..its not suits you..pattaka perfect….
(Sanskar takes her to class)
Chumzz :what happened…Swara what happened to you…
Sanskar:nothing…her leg got stuckedmuscle…
(He makes it proper)
Swara:haaaa…
Sanskar:Swara now try to walk….she walks….
Ragini:thank you so much Sanskar….
Sanskar:anything for pattaka…girls come… let’s go
Sam:Swara….are you fine….
Swara:ha baba…I am fine
Nadhni:thank god .
Twinkle:come let’s go….
Swara:Ragini are you fine…
Ragini:I am fine what happened to me..
Radika:ha what happened to her..
Swara:vo
Ragini:we are already late come fast.

In ground…
Kunj:I think should go check them….
Arjun:ok go.
Girls …
Mahi:wake fast…
Twinkle:shit I forgot my phone in class room… chumzz move…I will come.
sam:ok
( twinkle moves to back to class)
Kunj :girls…what is this look what is time now…
Ragini:sorry yarr .
Kunj:were is twinkle..
Radika:she want to class…
Kunj:girls…. I will come just now….
Nadhni:ok

In class room…
Kunj:twinkle
Twinkle:Kunj u here…. what happened.
Kunj:came here….vo
Twinkle:ok… let’s go….
Twinkle was about to go Kunj holds her hand and he pins her to wall….
Kunj goes close to her
Twinkle:ku…. Kunj…
Kunj:shhhhhhhh…
Kunj goes close to her. twinkle tight closed her eyes Kunj comes more closer to her .Kunj can here her heart beat. Kunj opens her hair…… Kunj goes close to her ears….
Kunj:tum kulae ball mai achi lagthi Ho….. Twinkle opens her eyes and smiles .Kunj goes from there. Twinkle to her self oh god what happened to me when he comes close I feeles butterfly in my stomach…..

to be continued. ……

(Hey guys…… how are you? Thanks you so much for your comments and supports. I will try not to be partial…guys I really need your support and comments….silent readers keep reading. …Please please please do comments. …love you all by Afa?)

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16 Comments

  1. kriya on April 10, 2016 12:32 am

    nice

  2. Sadaf khan on April 10, 2016 12:58 am

    Awesome…..

  3. ridhi on April 10, 2016 1:03 am

    Raglak is damn adorable

  4. ruhi on April 10, 2016 1:06 am

    Awsm yr

  5. srija on April 10, 2016 1:20 am

    nice update very sweet ??
    continue soon

  6. Me =) on April 10, 2016 1:34 am

    Too well going❤️❤️❤️??

  7. panchi on April 10, 2016 8:38 am

    amazing ….

  8. Sanam on April 10, 2016 9:24 am

    Nyc going❤️❤️❤️❤️

  9. sina on April 10, 2016 9:26 am

    Heartly sad for ragini?

  10. sina on April 10, 2016 9:26 am

    N its too awsm afaa

  11. Dheemahee on April 10, 2016 2:03 pm

    Awsome dear

  12. Afa on April 10, 2016 2:25 pm

    kriya:thank you so much for your comments and support…….
    sadaf khan:thanks for your support…..keep reading…..
    ridhi :thanks yarrr….For your comment…..
    ruhi:when I read your comments….I feel very happy to know that I have such a good reader……
    Me: thank thank so such dea….and always waits for your comments keep reading love you dea…..
    srija:thanks dea….I will try to post….I have function in my home but I will try to post. ….keep reading….
    panchi: yarrr thanks dea…for your comments….
    sanam:thank you so much. ..I will try to do it best. …
    sina:keep reading. …love you soooooooo much

  13. Afa on April 10, 2016 2:30 pm

    dheemahee:thanks dea……

  14. Vrutika on April 10, 2016 3:01 pm

    Afa it was amazing

  15. Ruchi on April 11, 2016 12:07 pm

    Afa it was amazing dear…
    waiting for nxt epi…

  16. Nikki on April 11, 2016 2:31 pm

    Awesome

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