The 4 am phone call || ShraMan || EDKV (Intro)

Hey guys…its me NIKITA.. Okay, So I thought, that before I post the last episode, I come up with the intro to my new ff…
It’s called , “The 4 am call”
Okay, now this is based on the movie “Karthik calling Karthik” okay??
Now,
Here’s a promo, followed by the intro.
(The whole ff’s based on Sumo’s POV.. Okay?)

I woke up again… As usual, suffering.. That dream does not seem to leave my mind. 5 years, 5 years passsed by yet I tend to think about it every night.. Cause, that’s the reason why I live my life lifeless!

A blurr vision of a girl holding another girl is shown, suddenly the girl’s hands slips and the other girl falls down shouting “Suman”

I killed her, I killed my sister, Sumo.. Why? Why did I leave that hand? Why did my hand slip off??

I tried to sleep, when I heard my phone ringing….

This time of the day? I knew it was mysterious, as the time was 4 am.

I picked up, and when I heard the voice, I trembled. It was her’s .. It was Sumo’s voice. That bold, charming thing , that always made me fond of her voice, I could feel that.. But how can she call me? is she alive, no she can’t be, she died in front of me, if thiss is not her, who is she?

Girl on the phone: Don’t think much. Its me Sumo only, your sister

I dropped my phone when I heard that voice again… It was her’s.. Definitely her’s…
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End of the promo.
Intro:

Suman: is a very shy girl,lives like a lifeless body after that trauma
Sumo: is a bold,charming girl.. (You can only hear her voice)
Shravan: a guy who is sweet, funny, loving and caring..

Okay, here Sumo works in an office and Shravan’s her colleague…

How’s the ff? If you’ll like it, I’ll continue..and yea, the promo might have been lenghty so here’s the basic storyline: Sumo helps Suman to get over the trauma.. Sumo realizes that Suman loves her colleague, Shravan, and helps her to confess it to him

24 comments

  1. pretty preeti

    So sumo and suman different different
    Niki it is a nice thought
    Happy u r hear with new ff
    Post soon
    Loved the promo
    Byeee
    Love u
    Waiting for last epi
    And will also
    Wait for first epi
    Byeeeee
    Love u

  2. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    This is gonna be splendid. M so looking forward to it! It’s gonna be a lot of fun! Mm hmm…a brilliant wrier with yet another brilliant piece of work. And ya, make note of one thing. Firstly, don’t feel bad. I dnt kno of EDKV fans, but most users on TU oppose movies being used for stories. I wish no one opposes this. And even of the person does, don’t pay any heed. U r a gr8 writer, u kno it, I kno ot, we all kno it.
    Take care.
    Love ya😘

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Aww laddoo.. this was so sweet
      i’ve always seen tu writers oppose film based ff’s. but trust me, im actually excited writing this one.
      and thank you for the wonderful comment
      And me a great writer? i dont think so but thanks!
      love you too
      -nikita

  3. Deotima

    wow the intro was soo good . the epi s will be !!!! just cant express in words. post asap. this one as well as the last epi of shraman and preekar. love u

  4. Nandini aka Nandu

    Hi nikku! Am so so happy and excited for this stuff! Glad that u have already in store for us before that story ends. Btw when are u gonna post the last part?? Lots of love. Keep writing dear nikku.

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you so much nandini…
      yep, i do have lot of stuffs in my head…
      I’ll post by monday.. im kind of thinking on what to write as i want a great last episode
      love you too
      -nikku

  5. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Nikki…it was just amazing…totally different concept..I hve not seen d movie..so its gonna be fun for me…wish u all d best for it…love u!!😊😊

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you for accepting the different concept.
      many people oppose this, but im damn excited on writing this ff!
      love you too di!
      -nikki

  6. sona

    Oh..god…its so interesting….it seems to b so mysterious..
    Interesting..keep it on…
    All the best..
    Nice promo..β˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜ΊπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

  7. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    And u killed me at the intro already!!! I better not think of wht’ll happen coz that’s obv SSS wala love triangle, but…..How will it go? If I think, I’ll become Einstine with no conclusion. Glad u started with another ff. Party!!! Post epis soon.
    Love x infinity.

    • Nikita

      |Author

      awww…………. Thank you so much.
      But one thing, there’s not gonna be a SSS love triangle..
      It’s gonna be shraman.. no villians, no vamps, nothing!
      And don’t jump up to conclusions and get happy, cause if i don’t match up with your expectation,
      i might feel bad about it.
      Thank you!
      love you loads…

  8. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    although m confused.. d names r lill confusing.. d sister dat died was sumo .. n d one who gets call is suman isn’t it?
    I have not seen dat movie… although a lill bit ..
    m really excited.. looking forward.. nikster!! ❀😍😘

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Look,
      Sumo died..
      And Sumo calls Suman.
      Clear?
      If you have any more confusions, let me know
      Thank you so much !!
      Love you to !!
      -Nikster

  9. Angel_pari

    Okkkk so i dont hv watch that movie so its gng to be fun i,m super excited post it soon but before that last epi is needed confession plzzzz soon

    p.s same pari just login nh kiya

  10. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    isiliye toh aap meri behen ho,meri Nikki behna. so nice intro.Sumo and Suman really love it.
    abhi by by bad main cmnt karte hain-Neeti

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Aww meri choti si pyaari shi neeti..!!
      Thank you so much..
      Koi nai, even if you don’t comment, I know you would read and would love it .. Right??
      Mera chota behenn,n,,,,,
      Lots of love to you
      – tumhari nikki di

  11. Anjali

    hey Nikita…m anjali …another shramanian or edkivan u can say like u all πŸ˜‰ I read the promo..it was nice yar I mean really amazing n different …
    all the best for ur new ff …how many ff have u written? ? Can u tell me the name of all…I wanna read all as m obsessed with edkv…. πŸ™‚
    update soon the episodes of this ff. πŸ˜‰

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