1960’s LOVE STORY TWINJ OS

1960’s LOVE STORY TWINJ OS
Hello friends SHAMZ here this is my first one shot I hope that I would be able to entertain you all……………
Please do comment…….

Twinkle Taneja – main protagonist (16YRS)
Kunj Sarna – main protagonist (25YRS)
Yuvraj Sarna – main protagonist (Kunj’s big bro – 38YRS) He has dark complexion and not so good looking and he is a widower…..
Leela Taneja – Twinkle’s mom
Ranvijay Taneja – Twinkle’s dad
Dheeraj Taneja – Twinkle’s Grandfather
Mahi Sarna – Kunj’s elder sis (40 Yrs)
Rajesh Khanna – Twinkle’s neighbour and very smart good looking guy….
This is a story of a village girl and a boy….how they get united and fall for each other……
The story starts with a girl maybe 16yrs wearing pink and yellow ghagra-choli playing hide and seek with her friends in her mangoes farm…..
Girl – Chinki where are you??? Chikni….
Chinki is hiding near a big mango tree and controlling her laughter so that she escapes from that girl…..
The girl who was finding Chinki went near the tree and caught Chinki from behind….
Chinki – Yaar Twinkle how you managed to catch me everytime….
Yes the girl who was finding Chinki was none other than our punjabi pataka Twinkle….
Twinkle smiles and says….
T – If you laugh so much than a deaf can also catch you…. (Laughs)
C (Sadly) – This time I tried so hard to control my laughter but again I failed….I promise next time I won’t let you catch me…..
They both laugh and went to their respective house….

Taneja’s Nivas
Twinkle comes running from outside and hugs a lady who is preparing food for lunch….
T – Maa….today again I caught Chinki…. (Smiles)
Leela – Very good beta…today I have made kheer for you….you like it na…..
Twinkle kisses her mom and went inside her room….she went near her window and looking at the green mustard field…..when a man looks at her and she just hide herself….
M – She is so beautiful….she will be perfect for him….
The man went to Dheeraj Taneja who is sitting under the tree and talking to his neighbour….
Man – Sas-sri-ya-kal Dheeraj ji
D – Sas-sri-ya-kal Mahesh ji….
M – Actually I came here with a proposal for you granddaughter Twinkle….
D – (Smiles) Really who is that guy???
M – He has 100acres farm…..
D – How he looks???
Just then Rajesh passes the lane….Mahesh points towards Rajesh…
M – He looks like him…
Dheeraj is very happy as the guy looks good as well as owns farms also…..
D – Ok then fix the marriage……
M – (Smiles) Congratulation Dheeraj ji….

Twinkle’s Nivas
Dheeraj went inside the house and called out Leela puttar….
Leela comes and she had a veil…..
D – I’m very happy today….do you know today Mahesh babu had come and brought proposal for our Twinky…The guy owns 100 acres farm and looks like our Rajesh….. (Smiles)
Leela is very sad as she doesn’t want her daughter to marry so soon and RT was also in Mumbai….as he works there….
Twinj Gunj…..
A man is shown working on his field…..
Labrourer – Yuvi Bhaiya today I won’t be able to work extra time as my wife is not well…..Will you pay me more as I have to go to hospital and it is far from village…..
U – Yah sure why not….and take care of your wife (Smiles)
He took out 10rs note and gave to him….
Mahesh comes to Twinj village……

Sarna’s House
A lady in her 40’s is making food for their family…..when Mahesh enters her house….
M – Sas-Sri-Ya-Kal Mahi ji….today I’ve brought good news for you….
Mah – Sas-Sri-Yah-Kaal Mahesh ji….what is the good news???
M – I’ve brought proposal for Yuvi puttar…..
Mah (Smiles) – Really……
M – Yes. She is the granddaughter of Dheer Gunj’s sarpanch Dheeraj ji….She is very beautiful and perfect for our Yuvi puttar…
Mah – I am very happy that finally my little brother will get married….
M – Shall I fix this marriage from your side as they don’t have any problem????
Mah – Yes from my side is also final….you just bring her kundli and we’ll take out the auspicious date for marriage….
M – I’ve brought her kundli with me….
Mahesh gives her the Kundli….

In the evening……
Yuvi comes back from farm…..
U – Mahi di I’m back at home….
Mahi comes out of her room…..
M – You get fresh…I’m bringing dinner for you
U – Ok di….
Mahi lays dinner for UV on the cot…..After some time UV comes and sat for his dinner….Mahi takes out hot chapatti with ghee spread on it and keeping on his plate…..
M – Today Mahesh ji had come and you what news he brought for us…..
U – What di???
M (Fanning UV) – He brought wedding proposal for you and I’ve fixed your marriage…. (Smiles)
UV didn’t eat his dinner and left for his room….

UV’s room
UV is walking left and right on his room and blushing badly…..
Here Mahi is confused….
M (Self Talk) – Why he went like this???
Mahi went to UV’s room and he is sitting on his bed and blushing badly and she notices this…….
M – UV….what happened didn’t you like the proposal or should I say no to Mahesh Ji….
UV (Blushing) – No
M (Teasingly) – So you don’t want to marry her…
U (Shingly) – No DI I didn’t told that I won’t marry her….I was just saying that don’t say no to Mahesh ji….and went out of his room and went to sleep in the veranda in happiness…..UV is watching sky which is covered with stars and it looks like a Dupatta covered with sequins all over…..He smiles seeing it and slept…..

NEXT DAY
Pundit ji arrive Sarna’s house….
Mah – Namaste Pundit ji….
P – Namaste Mahi ji…
He looks at the Kundli and took out date for marriage after 15 days…..
Dheer Gunj

Twinkle’s Nivas
Leela comes to her father-in-law….she is in veil
L (Frighten) – Bauji let Twinkle’s papa come then marry Twinkle…..
Dheeraj stands up in anger….
D – Who is the head of the family???
L – You….
D – So let me decide when my granddaughter will marry…and she is going to next district only so when RT will come then he will meet him….
Leela was dishearten and leaves from there………

Twinj Gunj…..
Railway Station….
A guy in 20’s comes out of the train….he is wearing black pant and white shirt and carries suitcase in his hand….
Coolie – Sas-Sri-Ya-Kaal Kunj bhaiya….
(Yes friend the guy who comes out of the train is none other than Kunj Sarna)
He went to mustard field and his eyes is searching for someone…..and after sometime he spot a man paying daily wages to a labrourer….Kunj smiles and shout….
K – Bhaaaaiiiiii…….
Kunj and Yuvi runs towards each other and hugged each other….
K – Congrats bro…I’m really very happy that you decided to marry once again and gave yourself another chance (Smiles)
U – Thanks bro…..I’m really happy that you came…..

MARRIAGE DAY
Sarna’s and Baraati went Dheeraj Gunj…..
UV is riding horse and Kunj is dancing in front of Twinkle’s house….people are dancing….singing…..and shooting in the air…..
Marriage happened peacefully…..
After marriage UV went inside Twinkle Nivas…..
Leela was shocked to see UV as he was doubled the age of Twinkle and she leaves from there in anger without giving any gifts or blessing to him…..
Leela locked her room and cries bitterly as her father-in-law spoiled her daughter’s life….
The baraat went taking Twinkle with them……
Twinj Gunj

Sarna’s House….
UV’s room….
Twinkle is sitting on the bed when UV gets in….He sits near her and removes veil from her face….Twinkle shyly looks at him and was shocked to see him and faints……..
U – Twinkle…..Twinkle….
He shakes her but of no use…..then he spills water on her and then she regains her consciousness……
U – I think you should rest….
They slept…..
After five months….
Twinkle vomits….Mahi saw her vomiting and get tensed so she called Dayi (Village doctress)
Dayi went to Twiraj room and checks Twinkle and after some time she comes out of the room….
M (Tensed) – What happened to her???
D – (Smiles) UV’s wife is pregnant…..
M (Hell happy) – Twinkle is pregnant…… (Smiles)
Mahi took out money bundle and gave to Dayi and dayi left from there…..
Mahi went inside Twiraj’s room and went near Twinkle who was lying on the bed and kisses her on forehead….
M – I’m really happy for you and UV….
T (Confused) – What happened to me???
M – You are pregnant………
Twinkle was happy hearing that she was pregnant…..

Dheeraj Gunj
A man wearing shirt pant and hat and having suit case in both hands enters Dheeraj Gunj and proceed towards Twinkle Nivas…..
Leela was making food when she saw the man entering and was very happy and tears starts to gushing out of her eyes….
Man – Dharam atni ji how are you and where is my lil raaj kumari???
Leela gets sad and hugged him….
L – Twinkle’s Papa your father had married our daughter to a man who is doubled the age of our daughter…..
RT was hell angry and asked….
RT – Where is my daughter????
L – She is in Twinj Gunj….and his husband name is Yuvraj Sarna…..
RT fumes and leave from there…..
RT reached Twinj Gunj and proceeds towards Sarna’s house…..
RT enters Sarna’s House….
Mahi was confused to see him…..
M – Who are you????
RT – I’m Twinkle’s Father
Mahi (Smiles) – You have come on the right time….your daughter is pregnant….
RT was hell angry and shouts….
RT – TWIIIINNNKKKLLEEEE……
Twinkle comes out of her room and runs towards her father and hugged him….Both of them are crying badly….RT wipes Twinkle’s tears
RT – Now you won’t live here….I’ve come and will take you from this hell….
Twinkle as well as Mahi was shocked….
M – But…..she is pregnant
RT – I don’t care….my daughter will not leave with that old man…
RT drags Twinkle as she was shocked and numbed and takes her to Dheeraj Gunj….

In the evening….
Yuvi comes back after working when he saw Mahi crying…He runs near her….
U – What happen to you Di???
Yuvi calls out Twinkleeee….
M (Sobbing) – She is not here….
UV was shocked hearing her and holds her shoulder…
U – Di where is she???
M – Her father came and took her for good….he said that he won’t let her daughter live with an old man….. (crying)
UV was shocked and kneels down….
M – UV you have to bring her back as she is conceiving your child in her womb….
UV was very happy that he s going to be father…..he leaves from there and went to Dheeraj Gunj to bring back her wife and his child…..
Twinkle’s house
Twinkle is very sad as she was away from her house and UV……she is depressed as she loves UV…..

After 6 months….
Twinj Gunj…..
Kunj comes back to his village…..
Sarna’s house
K – Mahi di….bhabhi…..bhai….where are you all….look, what I have brought for you all….
Mahi comes running out of her room and hugs him….
M – Twinkle is not here….her father came one day and took her with him….from past 6 months UV goes to her place and tries to convince her father but all in vain….Twinkle is pregnant…..
Kunj was shocked and he went straight to Twinkle’s house….
K (To RT) – Sas-Sri-Yah-Kaal
RT – Sas-Sri-Yah-Kaal beta but who are you???
K – Uncle I’m Twinkle’s bhabhi bro-in-law…..
RT angers rises and shout….
RT – Get out of my house your family had ruined my daughter’s life…..
K – Uncle plz listen to me once…..
RT pushes him outside his house….
K – Uncle you are torturing your daughter….
RT was hell angry and holds Kunj’s collar….
RT – How dare you say that I’m torturing my daughter???
K – If you think I’m wrong then ask your daughter once that she wants to come with me or not….and if she says no then my bro and I will never come to your place again and if she says yes then you’ll allow me to take my bhabhi with me…..
RT – Ok. I know my daughter very well she will never say yes…Twinnkkkleee puttar come here….
Twinkle comes….

RT – Do you want to stay with that old man???
T – Yes papa….I know he is very much elder than me but he is my husband and I can’t leave him and his baby is breathing inside me…..
RT was melted listening to her words and allowed Kunj to take her with him….
RT (Fold his hand to Kunj) – Plz take care of my daughter….
Twinkle and Kunj reached Sarna’s house….
UV was very happy to see her wife back to her home….He went and hugs Twinkle……

AFTER 2 MONTHS
UV is walking on the veranda and Twinkle is crying in pain inside the room……
After some time…..
Baby’s crying voice was heard and Daayi brings baby and handed over to UV….
D – Congrats your wife delivered baby girl….
UV’s touched baby’s soft hand and kisses her forehead and tears of happiness comes out of his eyes……….
After one year………..
Yuvi is working on the field when blood comes out of his mouth….

HOSPITAL
U – Doctor is everything fine????
D – Mr. Sarna you are suffering from TB and it’s a last stage….
UV was shocked and walks towards his home like a dead person….
Sarna’s House
UV enters the house….looking very tired…..
K – Bhai what happen???
UV hugs him and cried bitterly….
K (Tensed) – Bhai you making me tensed plz tell what happened???
U – I don’t have enough time…..I’m suffering from TB and it is in the last stage….
KUNJ and TWINKLE is shocked….
After 1 week….
UV is lying on the bed Kunj and Twinkle is sitting beside him….UV took Kunj’s hand in his hand….
U – (In a low voice) Kunj….take….care…of…wife…and…my….daughter….
K – Plz…Don’t say like this….bhai….bhai…
He shakes Yuvi but he was not responding……he was dead….
Kunj closes UV’s eyes…..Twinkle was shocked and was unable to handle the shock and faints….
K – Bhhhhaaaabhhhiii……

After 1 yr….
Kunj is going to Dheeraj Gunj with lots of chocolates and toys for Leema (Twiraj’s daughter)…..
A girl comes running towards Kunj…
GIRL – Pappaaaaa……….
RT comes near Kunj…
RT – Kunj beta if you don’t mind I want to give my daughter’s hand to you….
K – But….Twinklee…
RT – Do you like her???
K – Yes….
RT was very and hugged him….
AFTER 2 DAYS….
TWINJ marriage…..
Twinj Room….
Twinj room is beautifully decorated with flowers……
Twinkle is sitting on the bed with ghoonghat….Kunj comes inside the room and sits beside Twinkle….He removes veil from her face and Twinkle looks down in shy…..Kunj holds her chin and makes her face to him and he smiles….he opens her maang tika and kisses her forehead…than opens her earring and kisses her ears…..then he untie her hairs and makes her sleep on the bed…and he lays beside her and sensually opens her bangles and kiss on her hand….he removed her necklace and kissed on her neck…..and Twinkle caresses his hair….he moved towards her lips and kisses on her lips and Twinkle shy’s and hugged him….Kunj smiles and starts to untie her blouse….and kissed her every parts….Their love reached the highest level of love……………..
They lived happily ever after with 5 daughters and 2 sons…………..

………………-THE END-…………………

I hope you guys liked it………
plz do comment as this is my first one shot……….
LUV U ALLLL………….

Credit to: Shamz

15 comments

  1. Cutie pie

    Wooow !!!!amzing bt i was feeling to laugh at 5 daughters n 2 sons bt seriously i was awsme

  2. Sayeeda

    Wowww Shamz it was nice nd so different; the way u turned it from twiraj to twinj was awesome and the best part 5 daughters and 2 son …nd UV 38 yrs man ..oh my goodness it was too hilarious to just imagine it.

  3. kinjal

    Sorry to say bt it is totally bakwas and illlogical story..last part is nice of twinj marraige bt idont like this os ..1 23 are awsome bt in this os i dont see any logic and story was where going dont understandvit is totally different n again of real story. Totally disapointed

  4. Ria

    It was amazing.. But, too much love right! 5 daughters and 2 sons.. I burst out laughing.

  5. Aliza

    Ommmggggg…. 5 daughters n 2 sons… lollzzzz…. btw.. amazingggggg… awesommeeeee… truly a 1960’s story… 1st time ever had I read it.. n it was so beautifully changed from twiraj to twinj.. amusing os… loved it shamz… keep it up..

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