Hi all, sorry I had been a bit busy and couldnt finish typing this chapter before, as some of you had requested. I hope I have made up for it in someway with this chapter. I was overwhelmed by the love you have showered me with in the last update. I cannot thank you enough for it. Lots of love. Please forgive the typos – Azure
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Sanskar had been trying to knot a black tie around his neck, his face clearly depicting his displeasure. He had been dressed, in a black suit with a white shirt, getting ready for a party that he would have much rather avoided. It was a party thrown by one of the politicians that was part of his familyβs business nexus and the entire family had been ordered, by Durgaprasad, to be present for it. The reason for his displeasure have been two-fold, first that it was part of the world that he had no interest or intention in being part of and the other was because it was one more thing that was preventing him from spending some time alone with Ragini.
While he had been apprehensively about admitting his new found feelings with her two nights back, since yesterday, that was all that was on his mind. He wasnβt sure how she would react to it and wanted some good bit of time alone with her to really put his thoughts and feelings forward, in a way that wouldnβt distance her from him. But private time with her had been a luxury all of yesterday and today. If it wasnβt the Pooja, it was someone or the other trying to pull her in for some household work, Uttara and her nonsensical gossip, even Ashu has been particularly active on the phone and kept him away from Ragini. She had been so tired at the end of it that she had literally crashed and fallen asleep last night. Today was no different with Maa, Mom and Pari Bhabhi trying to pull her in different plans. If that wasnβt enough, his Bade Papa had thrown this party on this face now! He couldnβt even get her alone in their room for 5 minutes of peaceful talk.
Ragini walked out of the washroom, dressed in an elegant black saree with a light pink edge and full sleeves blouse with some work in pink. His eyes followed her as she entered the room and walked towards the dresser while still focused on fixing the saree. She brushed her hair and was about to tie it when he walked behind her and held her hand gently.
βLeave it open. You look beautiful with your hair letdownβ he told her softly, looking at her in the mirror.
She gave him a shy smile before nodding. As he looked at her, a though struck him and he moved towards the wardrobe even as Ragini got on with getting ready. She had just worn some diamond and pink tourmaline earnings when he walked over and stood beside her.
βThis looks much better, doesnβt it?β he asked her pointing to his tie before pointing to the two of them in the mirror βWe look good together, nowβ he told her with a twinkle in his eye. She nodded with a shy but warm smile.
She was about to pick up the box with sindoor in it, when he took it from her hand βLet meβ he said as he filled it in her forehead.
βRagini, Iβ he started to say βI wanted to β¦β he said. But even before he could finish the sentence, Uttara barged in and dragged Ragini out to help her get ready. Ragini gave him a helpless look as she went with Uttara.
Sanskar shook his head βI think the only way anyone is going to let me have some alone time with Ragini is if lock, bolt and seal this door with the two of us in it!β he said annoyed.
Ragini and Uttara had been standing by one of the tables chatting with each other at the party as the others had been dragged into different groups. Sanskar had just gone to grab some soft drinks for them since the waiters seemed to have exhausted them by the time they got around where they were standing.
βYou should have better company at a party like this, than Uttaraβ Laksh said, coming and standing next to her βBetter yet, you shouldnβt be standing, you should be dancingβ he said, extending his hand
βLaksh Bhai! How can you call me bad company?β Uttara asked him annoyed
βLaksh bhaiya, you should take Uttara dancing. She shouldnβt have to stand her with her Bhabhi instead of enjoying the partyβ Ragini told him with a warm smile
βNot this bhaiyaa thing again!β He said annoyed βHow many times do I have to tell you? And this party is not for dancing with sisters.β He told her
βLaksh bhaiyaa, you are forgetting that I am you sister as well. It wonβt look good if you are dancing with me as well, in that caseβ Ragini said maintaining her smile, though she always felt a bit uncomfortable around Laksh βBesides, I need to go look for your bhai and my dear husbandβ she said with a smile as she walked away from their quickly, before Laksh could say anything.
As Ragini walked towards the bar, she saw Sanskar standing with a middle aged lady. She was dressed elegantly. As she walked closer, she heard the lady talk
βIt must have been so difficult for youβ she said as she ran her hand along Sanskarβs arm as if to console him. He clearly looked awkward to be there. βShe was so beautiful. An angel really. To lose it so violently, seeing her die and then being forced to marry someone elseβ she sighed before continuing βNo one can come close to Swara angel. I cannot believe what you must be going through being forced to stay married to someone who doesnβt not even come close to being even Swaraβs shadowβ she added emotionally.
Ragini felt a catch at her throat as her eyes teared up. She took a few steps back from there.
Sanskar felt his anger rise at the way Sheila Raheja was talking about his Ragini. He had been listening to her for a while now, as matter of courtesy. He had felt extremely awkward about the discussion that was going on, and a part of him wanted to blast her for it, but he didnβt want to make a scene or be rude to her. After all, she was almost the age of his mother and he didnβt want to disrespect her. But hearing the last few words, he lost his cool.
βMy wife has a name. A beautiful name, Ragini. And she is quite amazingβ he told her firmly βI do wish Swara was alive. I do understand what you must be going through, as well as her parents. It can never be easy to lose someone close to you, but Ragini isnβt responsible for this and she doesnβt deserve to be dragged into such comparisonsβ he added as politely as he could, while still sending a clear message
βOf course! That is not what I meantβ Sheila said quickly βIt just thatβ she added emotionally, running his hand on his arm again βSwara meant the world to me. It is not easy to see someone, anyone in a place that was meant only for herβ
βMrs Rahejaβ Sanskar began to say, but before he could say anything more, Ragini walked over with a bright smile on her face
βThere you areβ she said holding his hand βI have been looking everywhere for youβ
Sheila Raheja looked a bit unhappy but schooled her look promptly as Sanskar looked at her with a proud smile on his face βThis is my wife Raginiβ he said introducing Ragini. Ragini nodded at her with a smile βRagini this is Mrs Sheila Rahejaβ
Ragini nodded before speaking βSanskar, Bade Papa is looking for you. We should goβ
They excused themselves quickly and Ragini dragged him to the furthest end of the party and stood by the lone table there. She looked angry and annoyed.
βWhat happened? Where is Bade Papa?β Sanskar asked her
βBade Papa didnβt call you. I made an excuse to get you away from that horrible ladyβ Ragini said making a face
Sanskar chuckled βYou were fantastic! Thank you for saving meβ he told her
βI had toβ she said sincerely βHow could she say something like that? Does she not have any sense. How could she bring back all the sad memories for you and burrow on your pain of losing Swaraβ he said angrily
Sanskar quietened hearing her. He held her shoulders and turned her around βYou heard that?β he asked her
She looked away from him, but he held a finger under her jaw and made her look towards him. She nodded. He sighed hearing that. He caressed her cheek with his thumb before speaking.
βLook donβt take anything she said seriouslyβ he told her honestly, looking in her eye βShe was just talking about things she has no clue about and all that did was make me feel awkward. There was not even a single grain of truth in itβ
βButβ Ragini made to say softly
βNo butsβ Sanskar said βJust hear me outβ he told her. He knew she must have been hurt and he needed to clear this thing immediately βYou are amazing! Fantastic! You are absolutely gorgeous. Swara may have been beautiful, but the truth is that she doesnβt compare to you. I am not saying this just to make you feel better. It is the truth. You are incomparableβ
Ragini heard him intently but didnβt say anything
Sanskar sighed βThe truth is that I never loved Swaraβ seeing her trying to cut in, he added βI just thought I did and I was delusion to think that. I was blind to the reality and blind to my own feelings. I fought those who wanted to make me see the truth and hung on to illusion for too longβ he told her, taking her hands in his as he spoke next βThe truth is that I was in love with the chase. I was in love with the adrenaline rush of pursuing the, well I guess, forbidden fruit so to speak. And one I thought I had her, it was about loving this feeling of accomplishmentβ he said shaking his head at the silliness of it all βThe truth is that she was only one in that relationship. She along with her demands, wants, desires. The only role I played there was to fulfil them. If in that picture, I was replaced by someone else, you wouldnβt have noticed the difference, because I was never there in that relationship β if it can be called thatβ
Ragini looked at him at the end of it βSo you donβt love Swara?β she asked again gently
Sanskar gave her a gentle smile βNo. Not even close. Trust me the only reason I was bothered there was because it was one hell of an awkward conversation and I was stuck in itβ he said squeezing her hand a bit βActually, there is something I wanted to talk to you aboutβ he said
βSanskar! There you areβ Adarsh bhaiyaa called out rushing towards them
Great! Sanskar thought. Not even a moment of privacy!
βPapa is looking for you. He wants you to meet Sharmajiβ He said referring to the politician who had thrown the party.
βDo I have to be there?β Sanskar asked annoyed
βYesβ Adarsh said as he held one of Sanskar hand and started dragging him away.
βWe need to talkβ Sanskar said quickly, giving her a reassuring smile, as he was being dragged away.
Ragini looked at him from far. He was some distance away standing with the rest of the men in the family, listening to Sharmaji. She picked up a glass of cold drink from a waiter who walked by and sipped it as she looked at him, lost in thought.
The past month had been a whirlpool of thoughts and emotions. She had gotten married without much choice in the matter and then found herself in a situation where her husband had been in love with her half-sister. The same sister whose name held bitter memories for her. It was a reminder of how her father never did or could love her. But then things had changed. She wasnβt sure what had happened, but they had become friends, best of friends. Suddenly, she was going things for smallest of his happiness and he could see that he was doing the same for her.
It didnβt stop there. She hadnβt expected that she would get so close to him so quickly or even care about him so much that when he was sad, she felt sad as well. Seeing him happy brought a smile to her face. And then something changed in his eyes. There was an intensity about them when he looked at her. That intensity had her heart racing. It made her blush. Smallest of his touches sent her skin tinkling. She had never felt this before for anyone. It was all so new to it. She couldnβt make sense of it, beyond admitting that he had become so important to her that his happiness, his dreams, his smile matter to her a lot more than her own.
As she overheard the conversation sometime back, she felt shattered. It was just her sheer need to get him out of that awkward situation that made her gather strength and go and face them after what she had overheard. It was at that time that she had another revelation, that she loved him. She loved him more than anything or anyone. She suddenly found herself understanding preciously what her mother had said to her about love. In fact, she felt herself standing in the same place as her mother was.
She knew Sanskar wasnβt her father, nor could he ever be like him. She knew that Sanskar would never cheat on her or could have never left her and fallen in love with someone else after they got married. No, in that he was very very different. She trusted him more than she trusted herself. But she also realized one thing in that moment when she overheard the conversation. Something beyond the fact that she loved him. No, what she realized was that she also couldnβt stop loving him. She couldnβt stop loving him even if he didnβt love her. She couldnβt stop loving him even if he still loved Swara.
She had never been into analyzing her looks, but for the first time ever, she had felt unsure. It wasnβt because she was unsure of herself. It wasnβt even that he had made her feel anything but beautiful, no it was quite the contrary. When he complimented her, admired her, he made her feel as though she was the most beautiful girl in the world, but that comment from Sheila Raheja had made her wonder, just for those few minutes, it had been a compromise for him.
But Sanskar as always had been wonderful. He had realized the worry in her eyes, even before she had a chance of understanding it completely herself. His words had been like a soothing balm to her soul. She wasnβt sure if he loved her or could love her, but the look in his eyes was telling her something. She had always been apprehensive about translating it but now, she felt something akin to hope rise in her heart. May be what she was seeing was love. Just may be.
He turned to look at her, almost as if he heard her. She knew she was being silly but in that moment she had been too lost thinking about him and looking at him. Him turning to look at her, made her skip a beat. He threw a questioning look at her. She shook her head to let him know she was fine. There was nothing going on. He threw her a skeptically look. She gave him a smile, figures, he would catch her trying to hide something. He shook his head and went back to his conversation and she to looking at him as she gently sipped her drink.
She wasnβt sure how long she stood there. She vaguely remembered Uttara coming and trying to talk to her. But for the love of god, she couldnβt remember what was being said. Sanskar had been making funny faces at her from where he stood, signaling her that he was bored. She let out a giggle as she shrugged her shoulders helplessly. He rolled his eyes at her. Adarsh elbowed him and signaled him to focus on the discussion that was happening around them. He nodded sincerely and looked away. She smiled shaking her head at his antics.
As she stood there looking at him, she heard a voice behind her, really close to her ear βBeautiful woman like you shouldnβt be standing alone at a party like thisβ
There was something decidedly slimy and uncomfortable about the voice. The closeness of the person infringing on her private space didnβt help. She turned around startled, moving a bit away from the man in front of her. He was a stranger to her.
βExcuse me!β she said a bit annoyed as she took a few steps back, away from him, only to trip on something that came in the way.
She was about to fall when the man wrapped his arms around her. She quickly tried to straighten as she pushed his hands away, but not before he slid a hand along her waist. She shoved him away βWhat are you doing?β she asked him angrily
βI am just trying to help youβ he said with a sleezy smile in his place as he touched her shoulders.
Just then, he was pulled away from her. Sanskar walked over, standing in between her and the man, covering her from him βStay away from my wife!β Sanskar screamed at him
βLook you are misunderstanding meβ the man said βI was only trying to helpβ he said trying to look at Ragini, but she moved behind Sanskar away from his eyes. She didnβt like the way he was looking at her βyour wife, is it? I didnβt mean any harm, Mr…..β he trailed off looking at Sanskar
Sanskar was fuming by then. Ragini could feel it even as she touched his back. Sanskar held the man by his throat, wrapping his fingers around his neck tightly, trying to squeeze the air from it. βI have a very good idea of what you know and what your intention was, Aditya Rahejaβ he said in a voice that was colder than steel.
By then a bit of crowd had accumulated around them. Ranveer, Adarsh and Laksh came running there. Laksh rushed towards Aditya βAdy!β he said before looking towards Sanskar βBhai! What are you doing? Let go of himβ he said trying to pull Sanskarβs hand off his throat. But Sanskar held Aditya in a vice grip. Adityaβs eyes widened.
Sheila Raheja rushed towards them, pulling at Sanskarβs hand as well βLet go of my sonβ
Sanskar was only focused on Aditya. His anger burning like coals through his eyes βStay away from my wifeβ Sanskar warned him βKeep her out of your cheap intentions and gamesβ
Ragini was worried looking at his anger. Worried not for Aditya but for her Sanskar. She didnβt want him to do something he would regret. She didnβt want him being touched by the world their families were part of. She tugged at his arm gently, to get his attention βSanskarβ she called out to him softly. He turned to look at her. He saw the concern and worry in her eyes. She shook her head, pleading him to let go. Sanskar took a deep breath and turned towards Aditya who was close to losing consciousness now. He let go of his neck and shoved him away βStay away from herβ Sanskar warned him again βNext time, I wonβt let go of your throatβ he told him before holding Raginiβs hand and striding out of there
βWhat is the meaning of this?β Sheila yelled from behind, but he didnβt stop or turn or respond.
βThe meaning is simpleβ Adarsh told her firmly βAsk your son to stay in his limits and stay away from Ragini. That is, if you want him to stay aliveβ
βNext time if he tries anything, Sanskar wonβt be the only one he has to deal with. I wonβt think twice about killing someone who bothers my sisterβ Ranveer warned them even as Laksh and Sheila held on to Aditya.
βI am sorry, but I think it is best we leave nowβ Durgaprasad told Sharmaji, folding his hands in Namaste as most of Maheshwari and Gadodia family excused themselves from the party.
Sanskar was still fuming as he strode along the way out of the plan, holding Raginiβs hand securely in his.
βOww!β Ragini yelped
Sanskar turned around concerned, seeing her holding her leg a bit.
βWhat happened?β he asked, anger leaving him and concern for her taking over
βIt is nothing, I just twisted my ankle. I will be okay. Letβs goβ she said softly, trying to standing up and walk, but ending up limping.
Sanskar let go of her hand and picked her up in his arms, walking towards the car. Ragini looked at him and held on to him, but didnβt bother him. She knew he would need some time to let his anger out, and she would wait for her to, patiently, standing with him all through it. She wrapped her arms around his neck. He looked at her once, as they reached the car.
Their bodyguards rushed over, opening the rear door, but Sanskar signaled them to open the front passenger door. He gently placed Ragini on the seat and fastened her seat belt, before turning towards the bodyguard.
βI will be driving the car todayβ Sanskar told him firmly βGive me the keysβ
βButβ the guard tried to say
βThe key!β Sanskar told him firmly βYou can follow us in the next car but no one is going to ride with us in this oneβ
Seeing the determined look in Sanskarβs eyes, the bodyguard gave in. Sanskar drove them back home, and carried her out of the car again, when they reached home.
βI am completely fine now, Sanskarβ Ragini assured him βI can walkβ
βShhh! Let me decide if you are fine or notβ Sanskar told her
βBut!β Ragini tried to say
βCan you just let me do things my way this once?β Sanskar told her, carrying her back to their room and laying her down on the bed.
He was about to get up, when she held his hand and made him seat next to her. Sanskar looked at her questioningly.
βAll Adityaβs are monkeys, ityadiβs with cuckooβs nest on their headβ she told him quietly
Sanskar looked at her βWell this Aditya is a slimy snakeβ he said annoyed
She nodded βSo donβt waste time getting angry on slimy snakes then. You donβt look good angryβ
Sanskar felt his anger calm down, despite his intention to not let go of it this soon βSo how do I look good?β he asked her
βSmiling, Teasingβ she said sincerely βeven annoyed, just sometimes thoughβ she added quickly
βI look good annoyed?β he asked raising an eyebrow βThat is a firstβ he said βAnd teasing. But what am I going to tease you about now? You had admitted that that Adi is a monkey with cuckooβs nestβ he told her, a smile making its way on his lips
βI am sure you will find somethingβ she told him rolling her eyes βyou are very resourceful in these mattersβ
He chuckled, not being able to hold it in. This was why he loved her so much. She just sense his mood and tried to make him feel better, even though it should have been him trying to console her and make her feel good after what she had been through.
He moved closer to her and cupped her face with a hand βAre you okay?β he asked her gently βI should have never gone away for that stupid discussion. I should have been there with you. You should have never had to face itβ
Ragini turned her face a bit and gently kissed her palm, before turning to look at him βI am okay. When you are around, I donβt have anything to worry about. He is a horrible person and I felt really angry and disgusted by himβ she told him, her face cringing at the memory βbut then you came and everything was okay. You always take care of me and make everything okayβ she told him softly
βI wish you had never had to go through it, or need me to make it okayβ Sanskar told her sincerely
βBut I need you. I will always need youβ Ragini told him softly, her emotions reflecting in her eyes
Sanskar gasped, feeling a tightening in his chest at the emotions that seemed to be flowing through him. He moved closer to her, leaning his head against her for a second before pulling back βYou are wonderful, do you know that? I donβt know how I was this lucky to have you in my life, but I am thankful to whatever fate and destiny or whatever it was that brought you in my lifeβ he told her looking intensely in her eyes βYou make me smile, laugh. You make me happy. I miss you when you are not around, so much so that I feel lonely, empty without your presence. Seeing you smile, warms my heart. I cannot bear to see you upset or sad or worse crying. I donβt know when this happened, but you have become my world, my life, my happiness. I know that if you arenβt in my life, I would be as good as deadβ he told her softly
βSanskar!β she gasped, her eyes tearing up βPlease donβt talk about death. I wonβt survive without youβ
Sanskar caressed her cheek gently, giving her a soft smile βRagini, I donβt know when you became the voice for my thoughts, window to my soul, but you have. I wanted to tell you this for some time now. I wasnβt sure what you felt about me or even if you felt the same way, but I cannot hold it inside me anymoreβ he told her, looking at her deeply βI love you. I love you more than life itselfβ he said, his voice cracking a bit with emotions as he said that.
She rested her delicate hand against her cheek βWhat took you so long to say it?β she said softly, tears running down her cheek even as a smile broke along her lips
Sanskar wiped the tears away with his thumb βI didnβt have you tell me about my thoughts, like you always doβ he said with a smile as he rested his forehead against here
βI love you Sanskarβ she said softly, her voice laden with emotions just as his was βI love you so muchβ
Sanskar gently kissed her on her forehead, her cheeks before finally brushing his lips against hers. She gasped against his lips, parting them gently. He captured her lips in a deep emotional kiss that expressed the depth of their feelings. A depth that they couldnβt in express in words.
Precap – All is well??
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111 Comments
I have no wards for you azure! This was thr most beautiful chappy.
Loved the way Sanky took stand for Rags. And can’t wait for the next chap!
Update soon love β₯
Woah ??
Im first! Lol.
Haha. That happens like…very rarely :):)
i am happy about it happening with my ff then ;)…..big hug dear
thanks so much Anu π so glad u liked it. Sanky is my fav so i try to make him look good ;)….will try to update soon. big big thanks!
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thanks so much dear…and ur ff is going awesome too. i read it on the way home but haven’t gotten around to commenting…will do that now
Superb superb superb continue soon azure
thanks so much dear..big big thanks!
Aww Azure!? I seriously cannot tell u in what state I am right now?So much cuteness in a single chapter?This is definitely cuteness overloaded??Tysm?Take care?
hahahah…..i am really glad u found it cute…and i hope it was a nice state considering the emoticons π π thanks so much dear. tc
awesome
thanks so much lovely π π
Wow superbbbbbbb????
Finally they expressed their feelings.
U rocked as usual love ur ff
thanks so much vyshu….and yes they finally expressed their feelings…big thanks and lots of love dear…..glad that i rocked for u
Please please post the next part soon I’m begging u. U r the most amazing writer ever. U rocked it today as usual. I’m eagarly waiting fine their intense Romantic moments. It will be great if Swara come back but it’s all up to u
big big hug taniya dear for your wonderful words and compliments. i am glad u loved the epi and my word. swara is dead unfortunately dear…..but she is making her presence felt since the mystery is around her death and ragini’s attacks. so she wont be gone. i will try my best about romantic moments…it is likely to get a bit intense now though….will try to update tomorrow dear…got home pretty late today and am a bit tired. hope u can bear with me.
awesome awesome what magic have u done really i will be waiting for ur ff love finally ragsan r united superb fabulious amazing dear update soon……………..
thanks so so much….the magic is all of us together…..i wouldnt have been able to create it without all of your encouragement. π so bit thanks for that! thanks so much for waiting for the story….it means a lot…big hug dear!
The morning scene was very funny n cute.. Then party.. Shiela aditya like people are the blackening society… Lol actually, when she said leave my son. Bytime ragsan know he can only be her son… Love the confession ..finally he said his heart and she too π :).. waitng 4r the next π
thanks so much roshni…v happy u liked the epi …u r right sheila and aditya are horrible…..dont worry they will get their due. glad u loved their confession π thanks dear…will try to update next one soon
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thanks so much dear π
wow best part of ur ff.it was amazing . confession was very simple but elegant nd emotional
am really glad u liked it dear…i tried to keep it as natural as i could….i wanted it to be emotional and something very private and unplanned. ….big thanks!!
OMG! with a big O!! Amazing RagSan confession. You really have a super brain with a awesome hand. I am out of compliments and messing up my words!! See how happy I am!! LOL. Keep writing like this di. u have an amazing vocabulary too. Its really suurprising that you are working in the finance field. Ap ko to writer ban na chaiye tha!! Kitni achhi hai ap or apki writing. Love you Loads
hahahahah….big big hug dear! and my brain and my hands both want to say big thanks π π but seriously…you are too nice to say that! thanks so so so much dear…i do want to keep writing when the time permits…haaha trust my finance forces you to use formal and professional language. it has helped…strangely enough. but you should never say never right? i hope i can write a proper book on the side as i work, someday….love u loads too dear!! take care…..
Lve uuuu….Nd miss u nd ua story
love u too dear…will try to update soon π
Finally tey confessed…tis s t best proposal ever….tis s so much beautiful nd truth even which roses nd surprises can’t tel…
thanks so so much dear….glad u liked the confession…i wanted it to be private and focused on emotions…nothing else acting as props u know….v v happy u loved it.
Really this was something else something heavenly the story wonderfully woven and the way you expressed it was mind blowing
thanks so much dear….am really v happy u liked the story and the way i have written it….big big thanks for your kind words!! big hug!
WOW!!! I don’t have words. Amazing update. Please update the next part soon
thanks so much dear……v glad u liked it. will try to update soon
Hey azure…at last sanky n rags spoke out deir emotion……????n scene at party wen sanky reacted 2 both mrs raheja…n aditya……..n nc scene aftr party …..n good dat all warnd ady….splcly ranveer….n d bst confession scen….cute but bold….???
Ok now….how r u……hope u r good…..??…..n love u lots…tc…hugs….
thanks so much dear….i am good…all well with you?? .and v v happy reading all the comments…smiling cheek to cheek…lol. yes they finally let their hearts speak….i am really glad u loved the confession and also the way they dealt with aditya….he needs bigger lessons but right now ragsan were important…some other time π lots of love dear…tc
I m a big fan of ur writings . I must say m in love with ur writing . Whenever I read the episodes ur Writings make me imagine the whole scenario in my mind . I must say u r jst awesome yar . Lot of luv keep posting
thanks so much nami dear…it was really nice to read that u love my writing and are big fan…i am really really touched and happy to read that. i am glad the words make u visualise the scene…i like when that happened…..thanks so much for your compliments dear….bit big hug and lots of love
Jst awesome…. waiting for your next post….
thanks so much piya dear…will try to post soon
i loved it yaar superb u know what my morning is start with ur ff i love you keep rocking
haha….i am really glad i helped make ur morning good in that case….love u too dear…..keep smiling…big big thanks!
Woooooo…..aaaaaaah!!!!!
Its really amazing, girl. I just want to give u a big hug. Love u loads n thank u so much for beautiful update…
big big hug from my end right back at ya! and lots of love too! v happy u loved it…..:) π
Wow…it’s getting interesting day by day…mind blowing
thanks so much lila dear …big hug! how r u?
I literally don’t have words to tell u how soulful is your writing that provides immense pleasure to the reader…your writing is as deep as the blue ocean whose depth can’t be fathomed no matter how hard one tries to…Seriously di by your captivating writing you have truly imprisoned my thoughts and ur ff has become somewhat an elixir of my life…m definitely addicted to ur ff and l have no regret for going to the rehab for that as long as ur beautiful story is with me???
Coming to the epi, really loved how Sanskar stood for Ragini and the sweet way in which they confessed their love for each other??? Also m speechless about the way Ragini’s thoughts have been portrayed…a mere thank you for giving us such a wonderful ff is seems too small now…
The precap is interesting as it definitely hints towards the uncertainties lying in the path of the duo which they have to face with a strong heart…can’t wait for it?
How r u di??? U must be exhausted right going to your job and then complying to our demands as well of giving fast updates…but what to do, we are very greedy about ur blockbuster ff…but don’t over stress urself. We can definitely wait but u must take care of ur health as its the first priority…?
Also a big thanks for boosting up my confidence and ll definitely follow ur advice and try to remain positive…
Have a great day and lots of hugs and love for u????
adu…..i have literally no words to thanks u hug u for your words too! you have showered me with so many compliments that i am on cloud 9…i need to figure out a way to get back to earth….teddy bear hug to you! i am so so happy and blushing and my cheeks are hurting now!! i need you here….i don’t every want u anywhere near rehab dear.
i am glad u liked ragini’s pov i had kept away from it for some time, waiting for this moment. and you guessed right about the precap….this is after all a love story with a mystery attacked to it π
i am okay….but u r right….really exhausted today as i got back home pretty late and had a few things to take care of before i could get online. i love to write for entertainment these days instead of watching tv so it is okay. but u might need to wait for tomorrow for me to start writing…thanks so much for being understanding dear.
n glad u are staying positive….best way to be!
lots of love
Wow superb chap… i luved Raglak confession part…
thanks so much dear……really happy u loved their confession π π big big thanks!
no words to describe how much joyful i felt after reading this episode..u r really blessed with amazing writing skills dear
ragsan confession was soo cute nd awsm..eagerly waiting for nxt prt
thanks so much for loving my writing…..i am really feeling good to know that u were happy after reading it…..my job well done π will try to write the next part and update it soon dear! big big hugs!
I really dnt know wht to say………….. Superb……..perfect………mind blowing…. Flawless……………. Fabulous……….. Amazing……..awesome………???????????????????????????????????????????????
Uttara and adarsh’s perfect timing?????? from starting to end it was just wooooooow………
Pura epi SAAADGI,purity, Intesity se bhara hai………..?
Ragini k sath baat na kar pane ki wajah se pareshan sanskar,We look good together, now….raglak conversation, sheila-sanskar,awkward sanskar,sanskar’s answer to sheila,ragini ka sanskar ko waha se le jana,ragsan,ragini’s thought(lovely, beautifully written?)
Sanskar making funny faces from where he stood and ragini’s reaction,sanskar ka aankhon se sawal karna ragini ka aankhon se,nod k sath jawab dena……..very cute scenes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aditya-sanskar-ragini-ranveer-adarsh….very nice………..sanskar carried ragini in his arm,and last confession???? u rocked it…….
Small small moments like-ragini ka helplessly apne shoulder k sath struggle karna,ragini moved behind sanskar away from aditya’s eyes,ragini bat se sanskar ka feel karna ki uska anger kam ho raha hai????????????
I know u will thing how lengthy comment it is……but seriously i love dis saaaadgi and intensity of love………..M already fallen in love wid ur fffff……………………..the way ragsan expressed their feelings for each other i loved it so much bcz i think dis confession was not planned… It was NATURAL…………..
IN SHORT loved it…………………??????????
u always notice all the wonderful small things i add in…..i wanted saadgi in this one….i wanted it to be simple, natural and emotional….i am glad u felt that way. bohot bohot shukriya aapki tarif ke liya…..aap har ek cheek itna ache se pakadti hai ki bohot acha lagta hai hamesha apke comments padhke. aur i loved ur lengthily comment. i am really glad u love this story and their confession. i am touched by your compliments…your comment was amazing and fantastic too! big big hug and lots of love! ek din mein koshish jaroor karoongi ki aap jitne acche comments likhti hai….utne accha jawab bhi mein de sakun
Hey dear…..
How r u ??????
U can call me TUM…………
Are shukriya to hume ada karna chahiye qki aap ki wajah se hume itni khoobsurat story padhne ko mili………agar hum tarif bhi na kar sake to hume sharam aani hi chahiye……
Are itna achchha to likh leti hai aap at least comment box to humare liye chhod do????? just kidding…… Take care…………
hahahhahaah ….aacha chalo comment box tumhare liye chod diya….lekin tum bhi mjuke tum bula sakti ho….. π
Awesome chapter and the best one. I love your ff…. the way you describe the smallest thing like ragini’s blush etc. Great azure!!!!!!???
thanks so much joy……really glad u love it….and very happy that u are noticing and liking all the small things. it makes the effort feel worth it. big big thanks dear!
Awesome you r really great
thanks so much sanchami….big big thanks for thinking and saying that! π π
Please post next part soon even if it is small it’s okay
i will post it tomorrow for sure….sorry dear..i really got home late today and am a bit exhausted
Next part please even if its small its fine
will try to make it up with next one promise…sorry